Hi does the following sentence sound alright, or should I replace "and it" with the word which?

It was filled with lies, corruption, betrayal and it kept me at the edge of my seat.

This is how I would word it:

It was filled with lies, corruption, and betrayal keeping me at the edge of my seat.

Alright thanks!

You're welcome.

... it's fine ... if you put a comma after "betrayal"

The sentence "It was filled with lies, corruption, betrayal and it kept me at the edge of my seat" is grammatically correct, but you can replace "and it" with "which" to make it sound more concise and cohesive. The revised sentence would be: "It was filled with lies, corruption, betrayal, which kept me at the edge of my seat." This version maintains the meaning and flow of the original sentence while eliminating the repetition of "it."