rewrite this ad so it will be more effective:

Three thousand five hundred dentists surveyed recommend sugarless gum to their parents who chew gum

parents??

I'd use a percentage, rather than 3,500.

I'd also leave off the last three words.

I'm sure it's "patients"

And, the actual ad reads like this.

Dentists don't just recommend sugarless gum to everyone. But if you already chew gum, then they do recommend sugarless gum.

In order to rewrite the ad to make it more effective, we need to identify the main message and potential areas for improvement:

Original ad: "Three thousand five hundred dentists surveyed recommend sugarless gum to their parents who chew gum."

Improved ad: "Discover why 3,500 dentists are recommending sugarless gum to gum-loving parents like you!"

Explanation:

1. Attention-grabbing headline: Start with an attention-grabbing phrase that highlights the endorsement from dentists and targets the parents who enjoy chewing gum.

2. Personalization: Address the parents directly by using "like you" to establish a connection and make them feel included.

3. Highlight the number of dentists surveyed: Include the number of dentists surveyed to emphasize the credibility and reliability of the recommendation.

4. Create intrigue: Add an element of curiosity by using the word "discover," implying that there is an interesting or beneficial reason why dentists are endorsing sugarless gum.

By rewording the original ad and incorporating these elements, the revised version aims to capture the attention of gum-loving parents while emphasizing the credibility of the dentist recommendation.