I urgently need to revise these sentences. Could you please help me?
1) In my family we are six of us: my father, my mother etc.
2) I like very much playing instruments.
I don't like doing shopping.
I like lots of sports.
3) My mum usually cooks breakfast for me. At 10.30 pm I usually go to bed.
I like chatting with my friends on computer.
4) On a (not my) typical school day I get up at six am. I'm sometimes very shy and I've got oval, wide-apart, brown eyes.
5) I like watching TV, especially quizes (better quiz shows) and news (the nees).Besides, I like reading science books.
1) In my family, there are six of us: my father, my mother etc.
2) I like to play musical instruments very much.
I don't like going shopping.
I like lots of sports.
3) My mum usually cooks breakfast for me. At 10.30 pm, I usually go to bed.
I like chatting with my friends on computer.
4) On a typical school day, I get up at six am. I'm sometimes very shy, and I have oval, wide-set, brown eyes.
5) I like watching TV, especially quiz shows and the news. In addition, I like to read science books.
Absolutely! I'd be happy to help you revise these sentences. Here are the revised versions:
1) In my family, there are six of us: my father, my mother, and four others.
2) I really enjoy playing instruments. I dislike shopping, but I am interested in many sports.
3) My mom usually prepares breakfast for me. I usually go to bed at 10.30 pm. I also enjoy chatting with my friends using the computer.
4) On a typical school day (not mine), I wake up at six am. Sometimes, I can be quite shy, and I have oval-shaped, wide-set, brown eyes.
5) I enjoy watching TV, especially quiz shows and the news. Additionally, I have a passion for reading science books.
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