INSERTS COMMA'S AS NEEDED IN THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS:

I'm telllling you Marge if Carol has another party this month i will have to buy a new dress anda new pair of shoes the kind I can also wear for other occasions. WHen i saw her last night she said she was too tired for another social event another evening of talk talk talk and all that stuff. She is i've heard starting a new job and that has to be a reason for her to slow down a bit don't you think?

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I'm telling your Marge, if Carol has another party this month I will have to buy a new dress and a new pair of shoes, the kind i can also wear for other occasions. When i saw her last night she said she was too tired for another social even, another evening of talk, talk, talk and all that stuff. She is, i've heard, starting a new job and that has to be a reason for her to slow down a bit, don't you think?

month,

night,
job,

The rest of your commas are correct.

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I'd be happy to help you insert commas in the given paragraphs. Here's the revised version:

"I'm telling you, Marge, if Carol has another party this month, I will have to buy a new dress and a new pair of shoes, the kind I can also wear for other occasions. When I saw her last night, she said she was too tired for another social event, another evening of talk, talk, talk, and all that stuff. She is, I’ve heard, starting a new job, and that has to be a reason for her to slow down a bit, don't you think?"

When adding commas, it's important to identify pause points, separate items in a list, and set off introductory and parenthetical phrases. In these paragraphs, we inserted commas to separate introductory phrases ("I'm telling you, Marge"), separate items in a list ("a new dress and a new pair of shoes"), and set off parenthetical phrases ("I’ve heard"). Remember to use commas sparingly, only when necessary to improve clarity and readability.