Im writing a argument essay about PETA and I cant seem to come up with a thesis…..I need help plz.
What do you want to say about PETA?
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)
http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
Read carefully and follow ALL directions.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.
To come up with a thesis statement for your argument essay about PETA, follow these steps:
1. Understand the topic: Before developing a thesis, make sure you have a clear understanding of PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals) and its core values, activities, and controversies. Consider researching PETA's campaigns, history, mission, and public perception.
2. Identify your perspective: Determine your stance on PETA. Do you support its mission and approach, or do you have criticisms and concerns? Your thesis should clearly articulate your position.
3. Brainstorm arguments: Make a list of specific points that you want to address in your essay. Think about PETA's achievements, impact, controversies, ethical concerns, effectiveness, and potential shortcomings. Use these points to shape your thesis statement.
4. Make it clear and concise: A strong thesis statement should be focused and specific. It should clearly express your main argument or position without being vague or general.
5. Here are a few examples of possible thesis statements for your essay on PETA:
a) "While PETA has played a significant role in raising awareness about animal cruelty, its extreme tactics often undermine its credibility and hinder the broader animal rights movement."
b) "PETA's controversial campaigns have successfully generated media attention, but their shock value overlooks the complex issues surrounding animal welfare and undermines public support."
c) "PETA serves as a crucial advocate for animals, but its confrontational approach alienates potential supporters and hampers effective collaboration with other organizations."
Remember, your thesis statement should guide the direction of your essay and provide a clear position for readers to understand your perspective on PETA.