Hi Sra, Concerning the French text
I don't know how to rewrite the text with all the corrections and English I want to say without it being confusing, could you please suggest a way?
No short cut! Just do your best and repost for final proofreading? Forget the English unless you MUST because actually it's far better to SIMPLIFY and use the French you KNOW and have studied! Just accept the fact right now that you may NEVER be able to say exactly what you'd like to say in a foreign language, let alone in your native language!
Sra (aka Mme)
Of course! I can help you with that. To rewrite the French text with all the corrections and the English translation, you can follow these steps:
1. Start by reading the original French text and identifying any errors or areas that need improvement. Make a list of the corrections you want to make.
2. Once you have the list of corrections, go through the text and make the necessary changes. This can include fixing grammar, spelling, and other mistakes.
3. Next, decide how you would like to incorporate the English translation into the text. There are a few options you can choose from:
a. Interleave the English translation within the French text: This involves adding the English translation sentence by sentence or paragraph by paragraph, right after the corresponding French sentence or paragraph.
b. Provide a separate section for the English translation: In this case, you can include the corrected French text and then provide a separate section or paragraph where you present the English translation.
4. Make sure to format the text clearly, using distinct formatting or headings to differentiate the French and English sections if you choose to include them separately.
5. Finally, re-read the rewritten text to ensure that it flows smoothly and conveys your intended meaning accurately.
By following these steps, you should be able to rewrite the French text with all the necessary corrections and include the English translation in a clear and organized manner.