could someone please edit my biography on Gaspard Ulliel?
Gaspard Ulliel est né à 25 Novembre, 1984 à Boulogne-Billiancourt, Paris, France. Il était le seul enfant et ses parents étaient riche et réussie dans le monde de mode. Son rêve avait toujours été de realiser un film. Il assisté l’université de Saint Denis, ou il etudié le cinéma.Il commencé la theatre à 11 ans quand un adulte ami apporté lui à une agence. Il apparu dans les films à la fin des 1990s et 2000s et était un acteur bien connu dans Paris.Il débute sa carrière de comédien dans le film "A Woman in White" avec Sandrine Bonnaire.
En 2001, il recevait un offrir d’un petit role dans le film" Le Pacte des loups" par Christophe Gans. L’année suivante, il est vu dans "See how they run" par Michael White. Il a participé dans toujours à des campagnes publicitaires des marques. Il est apparu dans "Une Femme en Blanc", un film pour la télévision française. Depuis ce film, il est devenu très populaire et a été nominé pour un César en 2003 pour "Embrassez qui vous voudrez". Il a remporté en 2004 pour son rôle dans Les Égarés. Depuis, il a joué dans nombreuse émissions de télévision, par exemple La Bascule, Juliette, Julien l'apprenti et le Refuge.
"né à 25 Novembre, " = to say "on" use "le" and days of the week, months of the year are NOT capitalized in French. = né le 25 novembre.
all adjectives have the same number (singular/plural) and gender (masculine/feminine) as the noun(s) modified = riches et réussis.....oú il a étudié (or for prior action = avait assisté & avait étudiee)
Il a appaaru...à Paris.....Il a débuté (I supplied his bio in French to make it easier for you!)
l'imparfait vs le passé composé = "il recevait" = he WAS receivING, implying that he never did get it, vs il a reçu = he DID receive
delete "dans" but then, without the English, I'm not certain what you were trying to say....dans des campagnes, etc.
apparaître uses either avoir or être, depending upon what you are saying. If in doubt, change the verb! apparaître really means "to come into view"
"il a remporté" is a transitive verb. Where is the object that he won?
Sra (aka Mme)
Il a commencé le théâtre (if you have a good dictionary, check spelling, including accents).....un ami adulte (adjectives usually follow the noun)l'a apporté
the passé composé requires an auxiliary or helping verb = be it être or avoir. = il a assisté à
I'd be happy to help you edit your biography on Gaspard Ulliel. Here's an edited version:
Gaspard Ulliel was born on November 25, 1984, in Boulogne-Billiancourt, Paris, France. He was the only child, and his parents were wealthy and successful in the fashion world. Gaspard had always dreamed of making films. He attended the University of Saint Denis, where he studied cinema.
Gaspard started doing theater at the age of 11 when an adult friend introduced him to an agency. He began appearing in films in the late 1990s and 2000s and became a well-known actor in Paris. He made his acting debut in the film "A Woman in White" alongside Sandrine Bonnaire.
In 2001, he received an offer for a small role in the film "Le Pacte des loups" by Christophe Gans. The following year, he was seen in "See how they run" by Michael White. He also participated in various advertising campaigns for brands. Gaspard appeared in "Une Femme en Blanc," a French television film. Since then, he has become very popular and was nominated for a César award in 2003 for "Embrassez qui vous voudrez." He won the award in 2004 for his role in "Les Égarés." He has also appeared in numerous television shows, such as "La Bascule," "Juliette," "Julien l'apprenti," and "Le Refuge."
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