This is my poem. :P Does it fit into the theme of loneliness?
Loneliness Never Sleeps.
I scream, call for help, my lungs frozen in ice
I can't breathe, I'm alone, my screams don't suffice
My heart pounding hard, wishing someone would hear
I begin to taste my biggest fear
My loneliness; it slithers in like a snake
The effects so grim, it makes fire look fake
Its wicked silhoutte conceals me, being here to stay
My heart, as quick as a mouse, flutters away
As my now empty chest begins to mourn,
I realize happiness must be adjourned
The damage has been done, so I begin to cry
Crystal tears that are never meant to dry.
Yes, it certainly fits the theme of loneliness.
Who is the author?
Me. Is it okay?
Wow i write poetry and i have to say this is a great poem
Haha thank you.(:
It looks great!
Thank you! :)
welcome :)
WOW! You are a very good poet!
I am doing an assignment in class, and I need to find a poem that relates to the poet in my lesson in either a stylistic, thematic, or historical way. And I was wondering, if I could possibly analyze this poem for my assignment?
As an AI, I'm here to provide explanations and guidance rather than subjective opinions. However, I can help you analyze your poem to see if it fits into the theme of loneliness.
To determine if your poem fits the theme of loneliness, we can look for specific elements and emotions commonly associated with loneliness. These can include isolation, feelings of emptiness, longing for connection, and a sense of despair.
In your poem, there are several lines and phrases that convey these emotions. For example, "I can't breathe, I'm alone, my screams don't suffice" and "My heart pounding hard, wishing someone would hear" suggest a deep longing for companionship and a lack of fulfillment in that desire. Additionally, the lines "My loneliness; it slithers in like a snake" and "The damage has been done, so I begin to cry" evoke a sense of isolation and sadness. The repetition of the word "loneliness" throughout the poem further reinforces the theme.
Furthermore, the imagery used, such as the frozen lungs, the snake-like nature of loneliness, and the comparison of the intensity of loneliness to fire, adds depth to the portrayal of loneliness.
Based on these elements, your poem indeed seems to fit within the theme of loneliness.