Here are other mistakes I checked.I'd like you to have a look at them. Thanks.

1) Elizabeth I led a powerful emperor with a strong ship army.
Elizabeth made England a powerful seafaring and commercial country.
"Does the word ship army exist???"
2) She was helped by sea storms. Correction: the English ships defeated the Spanish ones also thanks to the stormy winds of the Scottish and Irish Seas.
3) The witches were supposed to have a witch's mark (not "witches' mark) or a devil's mark on their skin. These were normal tattoos on the skin. Correction: these were any ordinary markings on the skin.
4) Elizabeth's Parliament was composed by twenty nobles. Wrong: She ruled through her Privy Council composed of twenty nobles.
5) They prophesy that Macbeth will be first "the" Thane of Cowdor (or Thane of Cowdor) and then king of Scotland.
6) The inner stage was protected by a curtain. Better: It was hidden/concealed by a curtain.
7) Boy actors took women's place.??

1. "ship army" = no such thing. An army of ships = Armada or fleet of ships

4) composed of (not by)

4) prophesy is a noun. prophicize is the verb so either "They prophicize" or "The prophesy..."

7) women's places

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http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/prophecy.html

1) No, the term "ship army" does not exist in this context. The phrase "strong ship army" seems to be a mistake in describing Elizabeth I's accomplishments. The correct statement is that Elizabeth made England a powerful seafaring and commercial country.

2) The correction for this statement is: "The English ships defeated the Spanish ones, partly due to the stormy winds of the Scottish and Irish Seas." It is important to emphasize that the English ships won because of their superior naval strategy and tactics, as well as the assistance of the stormy weather conditions.

3) The correction for this statement is: "The witches were believed to have a witch's mark or a devil's mark on their skin." It is important to clarify that these marks were not necessarily normal tattoos, but rather believed to be indicators of their involvement in witchcraft.

4) The correction for this statement is: "Elizabeth ruled through her Privy Council, which was composed of twenty nobles." It is important to note that her Parliament was separate from her Privy Council, and the Privy Council was the primary governing body through which Elizabeth wielded her power.

5) The correction for this statement is: "They prophesy that Macbeth will first become Thane of Cawdor and then king of Scotland." The word "the" before Thane of Cawdor is unnecessary and should be removed.

6) The correction for this statement is: "The inner stage was concealed by a curtain." It is important to clarify that the curtain hid the inner stage, rather than providing protection.

7) The correction for this statement is: "Boy actors performed female roles." It is more accurate to say that during Shakespeare's time, young male actors played female characters due to the societal norms and restrictions that prevented women from appearing on stage.