Can you please check these other sentences? Thank you.

1) Jasmine admits that people are ofen intolerant towards (of) albinos. She thinks it is better not to be very sensitive and not to take people's comments too hard (I don't know how to express it).
2) People should learn not to get offended by people's comments.
The protagonist is obsessed by the old man’s glassy eye.
3) He decides to kill him and tries to do it for 7 nights, but the old man always keeps his eye shut.
4) On the eighth night his eye is finally open and the protagonist kills him. He cuts his body into pieces which he hides under the floor.
5) Three police officers arrive, called by a neighbour woken (synonym??) by the noise.
6) On the wall to/on ( are they both correct?) there is the teacher's desk.
7) Correcting fluid or corrector fluid
a pair of compasses (plural), a sello tape, a glue stick.

Choose the 4 or so that you REALLY question.