English composition

I also bought a timer. After I turn thes witch to the right, clockwise, if I put the point on the switch to the time, it will ring after the time. We don't need a battery in this product, for it has a mechinacal spring. It is useful when you cook instant noodles over a stove. You are apt to forget the food over a stove. So use this timer, and you cannot burn your food.

---------------------------------------
I wrote a passage about the product I bought on-line. Would you check the expressions and correct any errors, please?

  1. 👍
  2. 👎
  3. 👁
  1. "thes witch" is probably supposed to be "the switch",right?

    1. 👍
    2. 👎
  2. I also bought a timer. After I turn the switch to the right, clockwise, I set the point on the switch to the time, and it will ring after the set number of minutes. This product doesn't need a battery, for it has a mechanical spring. It is useful when you cook instant noodles on a stove. If you are apt to forget the food as it is cooking, use this timer, and you cannot burn your food.

    I hope that helps -- there was too much repetition of the word "time" in places.

    1. 👍
    2. 👎
    👤
    Writeacher

Respond to this Question

First Name

Your Response

Similar Questions

  1. Drivers Ed

    Drivers Ed 5. Which of these statements is true of roundabouts? (1 point) Roundabouts are less safe than intersections with traffic signals. Roundabouts are more dangerous for pedestrians. Roundabouts increase the capacity of busy

  2. Dynamics of Rigid Bodies

    A 40 lb missile moves with a velocity of 150 ft/sec. It is intercepted by a laser beam which causes it to explode into two fragments A and B which weigh 25 lb and 15 lb, respectively. If the fragments A and B travel 45 degrees

  3. Physics

    Two forces act on a 55-kg object. One force has the magnitude 65 N directed 59 clockwise from the positive x-axis, and the other has a magnitude ofm35 N at 32 clockwise from the positive y axis. What is the magnitude of

  4. physics

    (a) One blade of a pair of scissors rotates clockwise in the xy plane. What is the direction of for the blade? into the xy plane out of the xy plane clockwise counterclockwise (b) What is the direction of if the magnitude of the

  1. physics

    A 200m dash along a straight track was timed at 21.1 s by a timer located at the finish line who used the flash from the starters pistol to start the stopwatch. If the air temperature was 30.0c , what would the time have been if

  2. Physics

    A bicycle is turned upside down while its owner repairs a flat tire. A friend spins the other wheel and observes that drops of water fly off tangentially. She measures the heights reached by drops moving vertically (see figure

  3. Langusge Arts

    Can you find 3 metaphors and 10 alliterations in this poem? THE Witch 1.She comes back night, in fearsome flight, 2. In garments black as pitch, 3.The queen of doom upon her broom, 4.The wild and wicked witch, 5.A cackling crone

  4. Maths- Directions

    A person moves towards north a distance 20m from point P and reaches at Q. He turns 135 degrees in clockwise direction and goes 40√2m. From here he turns 135 degrees clockwise and goes 25m. How far is he now from his initial

  1. Maths

    If tan theta= 1/5 Simplify tan(540-theta) In the unit circle do I have to go clockwise or anti-clockwise from the fourth quadrant? Please help is needed for this

  2. Reading

    In adventures of Isabel the only one of Isabel's enemies who survives is a....? A.The bear B. The witch C. The giant D. The doctor I think the answer is D, but here is the poem:Isabel met an enormous bear, Isabel, Isabel, didn't

  3. Physics please check

    An electric clock is hanging on the wall in the living room. The clock is unplugged, and the second hand comes to a halt over a brief period of time. During this period, what is the direction of the angular acceleration of the

  4. Trigonometry

    A clown is juggling at a circus. The path of a ball is given by the parametric equations x=2 cos T + 2 and y = 3 sin T + 3. In what direction is the ball moving? Up and to the right counterclockwise down and to the right clockwise

You can view more similar questions or ask a new question.