can you help to correct my answer and english grammar. thank you so much.
question below:
1. How does money is importance in our society right now?
answer:
The importance of money in our society right is more than anything else because everything is needed of money. money is the most important no one can do a task without money, everything you want to be done, money is involved to complete and to fulfill everything is because of money. In our society right now no one can go to school if there is no money to pay for the tuition, allowances and most of all food, clothing and shelter is the most basic in life everyday. Everyone is working because of money to fulfill dreams in life.
1. This is a very bad question. Are we to correct the question as well?
How important is money in our society right now? OR What is the importance of money in our society right now?
The answer: You left out now? The importance of money in our society right NOW is more than anything else, because everything needs mney. Money (capital letter to begin a sentence) is the most important th ing; no one can do a task without money. Everything you want to be done, involves money to complete and fulfill everything. In our society right now, no one can go to school, if there is no money to pay for the tuition, allowances, most all food, clothing and shelter. These are the basic thing in life. Everyone is working to have enough money to fulfil life's dreams.
Feel free to change it as you wish, but avoid run-on sentences, etc.
Sra
Most of your sentences don't make much sense -- and/or they are wordy.
Are you saying that money is more important than anything else in our society?
And what does this mean? everything is needed of money
And I can't believe you even posted this!!
money is the most important no one can do a task without money, everything you want to be done, money is involved to complete and to fulfill everything is because of money.
In addition to not making clear, good sense, there are at least 4 sentences there -- all run-ons.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
Please read this aloud to someone or, better yet, have someone read it aloud to you. And please don't post unproofread papers or paragraphs for us to correct. That just won't happen.
Sure! I can help you correct your answer and improve your English grammar. Here's the revised version:
The importance of money in our society right now is greater than anything else because it is needed for everything. Money is the most important resource, as almost every task requires it. To fulfill our needs and desires, money is involved in every aspect of our lives. In today's society, no one can attend school if they don't have money to pay for tuition, allowances, and most importantly, for basic necessities like food, clothing, and shelter. Everyone works for money to achieve their dreams in life.
Here are the changes I made:
1. Removed the word "does" in the question, as it is already implied by "how."
2. Replaced "is importance" with "is important."
3. Corrected the word order and wording throughout the answer to make it grammatically correct and more understandable.
4. Revised the sentence structure to make it clearer and more concise.
Keep in mind that these suggestions are just one possible way to improve your answer. There are often multiple correct ways to express yourself in English.