I need a topic sentence for my intro on technological innovation. Am doing it on Airplanes.
I've started my topic sentence:
Over the last century, technology has advanced very quickly. One technological innovation i felt was very important is Airplanes.
PLease edit my topic sentence thanks
See my response above.
Sure! Here's an edited version of your topic sentence for the introduction on technological innovation, specifically on airplanes:
"Over the last century, rapid technological advancements have significantly shaped our world, and one area that stands out as an exceptional innovation is the development of airplanes."
This revised sentence maintains the focus on technological innovation but emphasizes the impact of airplanes as a remarkable advancement.