can you please help me correct these two sentnces, and make them sound better. thanks!!!
From the sunset phrase the readers anticipated that the boat was in fact the transportation to heaven, and that the passengers were all from the dead. Moreover, this could only mean that the pilot of the boat leading to heaven was immortal, like an angel or a god.
Were you posting as Sam this morning?
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Certainly! Here's an improved version of the sentences:
"The sunset suggested to the readers that the boat was the gateway to heaven, with its passengers believed to be deceased individuals. Furthermore, this implied that the boat's pilot was immortal similar to an angel or a god."
To arrive at these corrections, I focused on refining the sentence structure and word choice to enhance clarity and coherence.