could you please correct it, and help me write it in a better manner.
From the sunset phrase the readers anticipated that the boat was in fact the transportation to heaven, and that the passengers were all from the dead. Moreover, this could only mean that the pilot of the boat leading to heaven was immortal, like an angel or a god.
Shaje/Pria -- please do not change names for your posts.
srry
Sure! Here's a corrected and improved version of your sentence:
The description of the sunset led the readers to believe that the boat served as a means of transportation to heaven, with its passengers being deceased individuals. This interpretation implies that the pilot of the boat, being immortal like an angel or a god, guides souls to their eternal destination.