i don't know how tomake this sentence advanced.. can you please help me!!! thanks. in my essay i was talking about a poem, and how the boat mentioned in it could symbolize the tranportaion of the dead to heaven. in this following line im trying to say, that because of this quote, its sure that the author is taling about seath and eternal life. but i cant put it in words.
here is the sentence
Given that death is experienced alone the next line, “one clear call for me”, endorses that the poet was depicting the scene of passing away and entering heaven.
again thank you!!!
change "endorses" to "suggests". One can never be certain about symbols, we all see things differently.
Sure! I'd be happy to help you make your sentence more advanced. Here's a suggested revision:
"Considering the solitariness of the experience of death, the subsequent line, 'one clear call for me', unequivocally affirms the poet's intent to portray the imagery of transitioning into the afterlife."
In this revision, I rephrased and expanded on your original sentence by using more specific language and adding complexity to the structure. This was achieved by using words like "solitariness" instead of "experienced alone," "subsequent" instead of "next," and "unequivocally" instead of "sure." Additionally, I utilized the phrase "portray the imagery of transitioning into the afterlife" to further emphasize the symbolism of the boat representing the transportation of the dead to heaven.
Remember, when trying to make a sentence more advanced, it's helpful to use precise vocabulary, vary sentence structure, and provide deeper explanations or interpretations.