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Could you please help me re word this paragraph. I need it to be at least 100 words, but this one that I did was not good enough.

Social media sites have affected commerce because people can advertise to thousands of people all at once through different sites. Social media allows people to stay up to date on the latest news that is happening all around the world with just the click of a button. By clicking on a button we are able to search information that we are interested in and obtain the information needed instantly. Many social media users are giving free advertising to companies by posting positive and favorable thing about that company. It can also work the other way when people hear negative things about a company.

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