I have written a paragraph about credit cards using at least five different pronouns. Could you please look over it and let me know if you see any errors, if my pronoun use is correct and if the sentences are complete. If you have any input about how a sentence can be improved please let me know.
My husband Chris and (I) don’t have any credit cards, and don’t want any. (We) have very good credit and would like to keep it that way. Whenever a credit card offer comes in the mail (it) gets shredded. As a matter of fact because of (our) great credit we just bought me a new car. Chris says with the high interest rates and ridiculous annual fees that (most) credit cards are evil and (who)**trying to figure out which pronoun is best to use here** (anyone) would be able to afford it. We have seen some of our friends get (themselves) into a lot of trouble with credit card debt. To (us) home ownership is more important, and having our credit in order is imperative since we’ll be first time buyers.
Excellent!
A couple of corrections.
"that (most) credit cards are evil" >> MOST is an adjective here.
"Who" is a good pronoun for the subject of "would be able to afford it."
Is the sentence
"that (all) credit cards are evil"
correct? is it the correct use of a pronoun?
"that (all) credit cards are evil" >> "all" is also an adjective here.
Examples of "most" and "all" used as pronouns:
Most of the credit card companies make a huge profit.
She cancelled all of her credit cards.
Ok I see know. Thank you so much for your time!
You're very welcome.
thankyou
Here are a few suggestions for improving the paragraph:
1. My husband, Chris, and I don’t have any credit cards and don’t want any. We both have very good credit and would like to keep it that way.
2. Whenever a credit card offer comes in the mail, we shred it.
3. In fact, because of our excellent credit, we were able to buy me a new car.
4. Chris says that most credit cards are evil due to their high interest rates and ridiculous annual fees, making it unaffordable for anyone.
5. We have seen some of our friends get themselves into a lot of trouble with credit card debt.
6. Home ownership is more important to us, and having our credit in order is imperative since we’ll be first-time buyers.
Now, addressing the use of pronouns in the paragraph:
- The first sentence correctly uses the pronouns "My," "Chris," and "I."
- In the second sentence, the word "We" is used correctly.
- The pronoun "it" in the third sentence refers to the credit card offer, and it is used correctly.
- In the fourth sentence, the pronouns "our" and "me" are used correctly.
- The fifth sentence uses the pronouns "most," "credit cards," and "anyone" correctly.
- In the sixth sentence, the pronoun "themselves" is used correctly.
- The last sentence correctly uses the pronouns "us" and "our."
Overall, your use of pronouns is correct, and the sentences are complete. However, the paragraph could be further improved by incorporating more variety in sentence structure and by ensuring logical flow between ideas.