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Help me create a better thesis statement than this:
Three arguments can be identified in “The Private History of a Campaign That Failed” that support the idea that war isn’t for everyone.

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  1. What are the three arguments in a nut shell?

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  2. The arguments are that soldiers should be adequately trained before entering a war, soldiers should consist of men not boys, and war could be traumatizing for the weak of mind.

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  3. I need with thesis and outline

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