T_T ok so here's another assignment that should be pass tomorrow. please critique and i need help on how can i close this paragraph.
"This English 101AYR course is coming to an end. What are your opinions about the hybrid (50% in-class - 50% online) course? What do you think can be improved about the course? (explain)"
Hybrid English course is good but it has also bad sides. If a student is looking for flexible time and busy of work then hybrid class is your choice. All of the assignments can be found and submit online so its less hassle. I enjoyed this class and my writing has improved. I learned now how to make a detailed introduction, and where to put punctuation in the sentence. I still make careless mistakes with grammar but that cannot be learn in just a short amount time. The only problem about hybrid courses is the lack of communication between professor and the students.
Please ask someone else to read this paragraph slowly out loud to you. You should find several errors.
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To close this paragraph, you can summarize your thoughts and provide a final statement regarding the course. Here's an example of how it could be done:
"To sum up, while the hybrid English course offers flexibility and convenience for students with busy schedules, it also has its drawbacks. Personally, I have found this course to be beneficial as it has enhanced my writing skills and provided a better understanding of the importance of a well-structured introduction and proper punctuation. However, one area that could be improved upon is the communication between the professor and the students, as the lack of interaction can sometimes hinder the learning experience. Overall, I appreciate the opportunity to participate in this hybrid course and believe that with some enhancements, it has the potential to be an even more effective learning environment."