first of all, im an ESL English student so bear with my mistakes
I have been an English 101 student for about 3 weeks now, and over the course of my stay I have learned a lot more that I thought possible. I learned to write, to express myself, how to think for myself, and how to find answers to the things that I don’t know. Most importantly I have learned how to improve my writing skills.
When I started English 101 class, I thought I was going to spend most time reading books and doing lectures but I was completely wrong. We are asked to wrote an essay just too see how do we write our essays and I think I did pretty well. Professor Battle told us that are focus is on writing so students who are going to English 102 will be prepared. Also this is summer semester, class is really tough and intense, and so I need to work hard and do everything in advance.
Also, I have learned that 50/50 class is better than the traditional 100% face to face class. This class is much easier and time is flexible because I have plenty of time to do my homework online at home. I’m also taking a biology class so I need to balance my time for everything.
I know my ability to write, express my ideas, thoughts and knowledge has grown every time I attend this class. I have always struggled to put my thoughts on paper in a manner that is correct according to assignments. My remarks have always something do with wrong grammar, sentence run-on and punctuations. These are the things that I’m going to work on and improve in the next coming class. The paper that I wrote on the first in class essay was not good. I did not give good examples and didn’t formulate good ideas. What I did was I just applied what I learned in my previous English course and what I had found in my research. My previous English courses have really helped to get rid of my bad writing habits and helped me to write better papers and think of better ideas.
There are a couple of things that I need to improve in order to be good at writing, and I hope I can achieve this by the end of semester. I hope to learn more ways to on how to improve and learn different styles of writing.
any suggestions or ideas will be appreciated thanks
My first suggestion is that you proof read your writing. I find that letting is sit overnight first is helpful.
Secondly, it is somewhat cheezy, as if you are trying to impress your instructor. Examples: your specifics on your "bad writing habits" is non-existent; "a couple of things" another example. To improve in anything, you have to address specifics. Including specifics (and avoiding vague generalities) would greatly add to self-reflection, if that is the purpose of this.
I am reminded of the couple who went to marriage counseling, and each wanted to just talk about the other's "issues".
can you point out where are my mistakes please
Bobpursley's advice to let it sit overnight and then proofread it is great advice.
After you've done that and corrected the mistakes you find, please repost it.
alright will do. . thanks miss sue. . deadline for this is tomorrow i guess i will fail hihi fingers crossed
Great job on your English 101 journey so far! It sounds like you have learned a lot and have made some great progress in your writing skills. Writing can be a challenging skill to master, but with practice and dedication, you can continue to improve.
One important thing you mentioned is the ability to find answers to things you don't know. This is a crucial skill in any academic endeavor, including writing. When you encounter a question or an area of uncertainty, there are a few steps you can take to find the answer:
1. Research: Start by researching the topic or question you have. Look for reputable sources such as books, scholarly articles, or reliable websites. Take note of the information that can help you find the answer.
2. Consult your course materials: Check your course textbook, lecture notes, or any other resources provided by your professor. They often contain valuable information that can help clarify any confusion or provide answers to your questions.
3. Seek help from your instructor or classmates: If you're still having trouble finding the answer, don't hesitate to reach out to your instructor or classmates. Your instructor can provide guidance or direct you to additional resources. Classmates can also offer insights or share their understanding of the topic.
4. Practice critical thinking: Develop your critical thinking skills to help you analyze and evaluate information. This will enable you to make informed decisions and draw logical conclusions.
As you mentioned, it's great to have a clear focus on writing in your English 101 class. Writing essays can further enhance your writing skills and help you express your ideas effectively. Remember to follow the guidelines provided by your professor and aim for clear organization, strong thesis statements, well-supported arguments, and proper grammar and punctuation.
It's also wonderful that you have discovered the advantages of a 50/50 class format over a traditional face-to-face setting. This blended learning approach allows for flexibility and more time to work on assignments from the comfort of your home. Just ensure that you manage your time effectively to balance your English 101 class with your biology class and other commitments.
In the next coming classes, be sure to work on areas that you want to improve, such as grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation. You can use the feedback you receive from your professor and learn from your past mistakes to make progress. Additionally, consider seeking additional resources or workshops that focus on improving writing skills.
By the end of the semester, your goal of learning more ways to improve and mastering different styles of writing is definitely achievable. Keep up the hard work, practice regularly, and don't hesitate to seek help when needed. With dedication and perseverance, you will continue to grow as a writer. Good luck!