I forgot to add the following statements. Thank you very much for your cooperation.
1) What did you like most among the various topics we dealt with during your school year?
2) Are you going to continue your study of English at university?
3) Are you going to continue your studies (at university) (how can you express this: you want to know if someone wants to go to university after high school and which faculty is going to attend)
4) The character's thougts flow freely without any temporal structures (correction: .... freely in time)
5) Introductory expressions are missing.The flow of thoughts are (or is??) not ordered (Correction: the character's flow of thoughts doesn't follow a chronological or a logical formal order).
6)In the second type of interior monologue two levels of narration are present. (and not: are present two levels of narration)
7)I'm the father of a six-year-old child, who likes staying in the open-air. In particular, he is fond of football, mini-golf and horse-riding.
8) I'm therefore looking for a family-friendly hotel accommodation in west Ireland near the main tourist attractions and possibly near a town, where my child can practise his favourite sports.
9) I really hope you can help me find a suitable (?) accommodation.
Thank you.
Choose the 3 or 4 MAXIMUM that you truly question.
You're welcome! Here are your revised statements:
1) What was your favorite among the various topics we covered during your school year?
2) Do you plan on continuing your study of English at university?
3) Are you planning on attending university after high school? If so, which faculty are you interested in?
4) The character's thoughts flow freely in time without any temporal structures.
5) The character's flow of thoughts doesn't follow a chronological or a logical formal order. Additionally, introductory expressions are missing.
6) In the second type of interior monologue, there are two levels of narration.
7) I am the father of a six-year-old child who enjoys outdoor activities, particularly football, mini-golf, and horse-riding.
8) Therefore, I am seeking family-friendly hotel accommodations in west Ireland that are near the main tourist attractions and preferably close to a town where my child can participate in his favorite sports.
9) I sincerely hope that you can assist me in finding suitable accommodations.