Can you please check the following sentences? It is really urgent. Thank you very much.
1) Last summer I went to South Africa with my family. In my opinion, it was the most exciting holiday I have ever had.
2) Actually, South Africa has got a lot of wild animals such as lions, elephants and hippos.
3)I couldn’t believe people could eat the meat of animals such as crocodiles or zebras. (I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw people eating the meat of...)
4) The scenery was gorgeous, too. The desert was great though we had an unpleasant experience. I got really frightened when my sister unintentionally touched a snake. Luckily she wasn’t bitten.
5) I liked Cape Town most (the most) because of its skyscrapers and wonderful landscapes.
6) The most frightening experience I had was when I got into a cage full of lions.
O.K.
Sra
Sure, here's my feedback on the sentences:
1) Last summer, I went to South Africa with my family. In my opinion, it was the most exciting holiday I have ever had.
- The sentence is grammatically correct and conveys the intended meaning. Good job!
2) Actually, South Africa has a lot of wild animals such as lions, elephants, and hippos.
- The sentence is grammatically correct. However, it would be better to use "has" instead of "has got" for smoother flow.
3) I couldn't believe people could eat the meat of animals such as crocodiles or zebras. (I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw people eating the meat of...)
- The sentence is grammatically correct. However, to add more context, you can include "I couldn't believe my eyes" before "when I saw people eating the meat of..."
4) The scenery was gorgeous too. The desert was great, though we had an unpleasant experience. I got really frightened when my sister unintentionally touched a snake. Luckily, she wasn't bitten.
- The sentence is mostly correct. You can add a comma after "gorgeous too" for better punctuation. Also, consider saying "we had an unpleasant experience when" to improve the flow.
5) I liked Cape Town the most because of its skyscrapers and wonderful landscapes.
- The sentence is grammatically correct. However, you can add "the most" after "liked Cape Town" to emphasize your preference.
6) The most frightening experience I had was when I got into a cage full of lions.
- The sentence is grammatically correct. Great job!
Overall, your sentences are well-written and convey your experiences in South Africa effectively. Just consider the minor suggestions mentioned.