is this senetence put right? or how do i fix it?

Commas are very important to add to a sentence where they are needed because if you don't properly use them, the reader will be confused.

asked by diana
  1. It's very awkwardly phrased. Try this:

    It's very important to put commas in a sentence where they are needed so readers are not confused.

    posted by Writeacher
  2. You need a comma after needed.

    posted by Ms. Sue
  3. how about

    John went to the store, then called Kristy.

    posted by diana
  4. That's a run-on sentence. How do you think you can fix it?

    posted by Ms. Sue
  5. john went to the store, then when he got home, he called Kristy.

    posted by diana
  6. Nope.

    John went to the store, and then called Kristy.

    posted by Ms. Sue

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