I have to write a paragraph in which I describe my strategy for using writepoint in the future. This must include a discussion of how to accommodate submission and feedback time. I also need to underline the topic sentence. Could you please look at my paragraph and tell me if it is ok. This is due tommorrow.

When using Writepoint in the future it ensures that I am using my grammar and word choice correctly. By advising me of a different word choice, it allows me to consider using different terms in my writing. I plan to use Writepoint in the future for essays or papers to minimize the errors in my sentence construction. By not waiting in delaying my submission on papers, it will in turn give me enough time to correct any errors that I have made. Feedback time is rather quick when submitting to Writepoint as long as is it is not submitted on a Sunday or a Monday. Submitting papers on these days can cause a delay in retrieving your results. When using Writepoint I need to make sure whether or not the change is actually correct. By doing this I can avoid making mistakes that could have been prevented.

I would shift the subject of every sentence to yourself. The prompt is asking how YOU would use the program. Put the focus on what the prompt is asking about.

One way to help take care of this is to make all verbs active; use no passive verbs in your sentences.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/passive.htm

Overall, your paragraph is well-written and successfully describes your strategy for using Writepoint in the future. I would suggest making a few edits to improve clarity and coherence. Here is the revised version:

When using Writepoint in the future, my strategy is to ensure that I am using correct grammar and word choice. By providing suggestions for alternative word choices, Writepoint enables me to consider different terms in my writing. I plan to utilize Writepoint for essays or papers to minimize errors in sentence construction. To accommodate submission and feedback time, I will avoid waiting until the last minute to submit my papers. By submitting them early, I will have sufficient time to review and correct any mistakes. It is important to note that feedback response time is usually quick, except for submissions made on Sundays or Mondays, as these may experience delays. Thus, I will aim to submit my papers on other days of the week to expedite the feedback process. Additionally, I will double-check whether the suggested changes made by Writepoint are indeed correct to prevent any inadvertent mistakes.

I have underlined the revised topic sentence for your convenience. Good luck with your assignment!