I need you to check the following sentences on the same theme. Thank you very much.
1) You should start your paragraph with an introductory sentence and write a conclusion at the end.
2) Your paragraph must be preceded by an introductory sentece and followed by a conclusion.
3) You failed to use sentence connectors to join your sentences together.
4) He is referred to as a horrid slave and he is kept prisoner in a cave like an animal farm (better: like a farm animal). Prospero considers Caliban as a slave.
5) Caliban inhabited the island on(to) which Prospero was sent.Prospero has got such magic powers that he could conquer and enslave the god Setebos, his mother used to worship.
6) To spoil his relationship with Prospero he tried to Prospero’s daughter Miranda.
7) Be consistent in the use of the simple past. Don’t switch from the past to the present when presenting the plot.
2. spelling of sentence
4. yes, better as: a farm animal
Prospero considers Caliban a slave.
5. magical (adjective) better with powers
the god Setebos that his mother used to worship
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