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Please check for any errors. Correct them and I would appreciate it. Thanks!!!

This will confirmed your reservation for a sweet of four rooms on a non-smoking floor for the dates of July 3-July 9. As you requested, we will hold your sweet for your late arrival.
Incidentally, we have opened a new mall of shops on the lower floor of the hotel that includes a clothing boutique, a florist, a barbershop, a beauty salon, and a sweet shop.
We look forward to your arrival. Visit our website to see a list of events and services we offer. If there are any way we can serve you, while you are here don’t hesitate to let us know.

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  1. Please check for any errors. Correct them and I would appreciate it. Thanks!!!
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    The first error I saw was how you wrote, "English." Only the first letter is capitalized.

    https://www.google.com/search?q=capital+letters+grammar+rules

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    This will confirmed your reservation for a sweet of four rooms on a non-smoking floor for the dates of July 3-July 9.
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    "Will confirmed" are 2 separate tenses. You used past tense and future tense.

    "This confirms" is correct.

    Right now, it also looks like someone reserved candy. :-) Suite is the word you need.

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    As you requested, we will hold your sweet for your late arrival.
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    See above.

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    Incidentally, we have opened a new mall of shops on the lower floor of the hotel that includes a clothing boutique, a florist, a barbershop, a beauty salon, and a sweet shop.
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    This is good, but I would change "sweet shop" to something else (candy store, maybe?!). It looks too much like "sweat shop" when I quickly read it. That is not a good thing to have. :-D

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    We look forward to your arrival. Visit our website to see a list of events and services we offer.
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    I would say, "Please visit..." Just sounds less demanding

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    If there are any way we can serve you, while you are here don’t hesitate to let us know.
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    Are-plural
    Way-singular

    If there is any way we can serve you while you are here, don't hesitate to let us know.

    (Notice I moved the comma).

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