French - final revision

A mon avis, le système d'éducation doit améliorer sa méthode d'enseignement. Le système d'éducation doit devenir plus de défier et les enseignants doivent motiver les enfants pour travailler dur s'ils peuvent devenir des lettrés futurs. Le système d'éducation doit améliorer en devenant plus stimulant mentalement.

L'amélioration clée que le système d'éducation pourrait appliquer c'est la motivation. Beaucoup d'étudiants ont le potentiel pour exceller dans n'importe quel sujet s'ils sont motivés pour faire bien. Les étudiants devraient être encouragés à faire bien de sont mis pour leur échec d'être posés parce qu'ils perdront l'espoir et continueront à échouer. Donc, notre école a besoin de la meilleure si les étudiants sont motivés dans le bon sens pour motiver les étudiants. Les peines doivent être plus strictes. Beaucoup d'étudiants ne le trouvent pas obligatoire pour assister à l'école parce qu'ils ne sont pas intéressés dans l'érudition. S'ils ne vont pas être instruits régulièrement aux étapes premières ils n'apprennent pas la lecture fondamentale, l'écriture et les compétences mathématiques qui sont importantes sur une base conseillant donc des besoins être améliorés par conséquent, il faut améliorer le conseil pour que les étudiants soient encouragés à essayer.

Beaucoup de méthodes d'enseignement devraient être améliorées. Par exemple, au lieu de demander aux étudiants d'écrire une réponse de journal de cinq pages ils doivent la limiter à 2 pages. Dans quelques cas, quand les étudiants sont forcés à faire le travail supplémentaire, ils ne mettent pas beaucoup d'effort dans celui-là et leur objectif principal est de le finir plutôt. Ils peuvent satisfair à la quantité de travail exigé, mais ils ne satisfont pas la qualité de travail. Comme l'étudiant atteint de plus hauts degrés la quantité de travail peut devenir graduellement plus grande. Cependant, par d'ici là l'étudiant aurait développé des compétences nécessaires de satisfaire à la qualité de travail exigé.

L'école doit devenir défier plus mais à la fois, les enseignants doivent assurer que tout le monde dans la classe est à cette norme. Les étudiants doivent commencer à mériter leurs notes et à atteindre la norme exigée afin de réussir. Ils doivent avoir la stimulation mentale. Les ateliers supplémentaires devraient être offerts pour les étudiants qui ont besoin des leçons particulières. Si un étudiant a quelque difficulté pendant une conférence de classe, si la question est petite ils doivent demander là-bas et alors séance tenante. Cependant, s'ils ont besoin de plus d'attention l'enseignant doit vouloir bien rester après la classe pour les aider au lieu de prendre longtemps pour repasser ce matériel et ralentir les autres étudiants.

Le système d'éducation devrait être environ construit aidant les étudiants. Les lettrés futurs sont le produit d'une bonne éducation. Nous serons des dirigeants futurs et nous avons besoin d'avoir beaucoup de connaissance.

In my opinion, the education system should improve its teaching method. The education system should become more challenging and the teachers should motivate the children to work hard so they can become future scholars. The education system should improve by becoming more mentally stimulating.

The key improvement the education system could enforce is motivation. Many students have the potential to excel in any subject if they are motivated to do well. The students should be encouraged to do well instead of being put down for their failure because they will lose hope and continue to fail. Therefore, our school needs better counseling so the students are motivated in the right direction. Penalties should be stricter. Many students do not find it mandatory to attend school because they are not interested in learning. If they do not go to school regularly at the early stages they do not learn basic reading, writing, and mathematical skills that are important on a daily basis. Therefore, counseling needs to be improved so that the students are encouraged to try.

Many methods of teaching should be improved. For example, instead of asking students to write a 5 page journal response, they should limit it to 2 pages. In some cases, when students are forced to do excess work, they do not put a lot of effort into it and their main objective is to finish it instead. They may meet the quantity of work required, but they do not satisfy the quality of work. As the student reaches higher grades the quantity of work can gradually become larger. However, by then the student would have developed skills necessary to satisfy the quality of work required.

School should become more challenging, but at the same time teachers should make sure everyone in class is at that standard. Students should start earning their marks and reach the standard required in order to pass it. They should have mental stimulation. Extra workshops should be offered for students who need a little bit of tutoring. If a student has difficulty during a class lecture, if the question is small they should ask for help there and then. However, if they need more attention the teacher should be willing to stay a while after class to help them instead of taking a long time to cover that material and slowing the other students down.

The education system should be built around helping the students. Future scholars are the product of a good education. We are going to be future leaders and we need to have a lot of knowledge.

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  1. Bonsoir! I'll not be looking at the English but concentrating more on the French.

    ligne 2 = plus de = doit défier plus...
    lignes 3-4 = dur pour devenir

    paragraph 2, ligne 4 = `faire bien au lieu d'être voués à l'échec parce qu'ils perdront...

    ligne 6 = a besoin de conseiller mieux pour motiver les étudiantes dans le bon sens. (stop there)

    sur une base quotidienne. Par conséquent, il faut amékoorer, etc. (Note I left some of the verbosity out.)

    Paragraphe 3, ligne 6 = satisfaire (spelling)

    Paragraphe 4, ligne 1 = L'école doit défier plus

    Last paragraphe = word order = Le système d'éducation devrait être construit autour d'aider

    Hopefully I caught everything; sorry but the eyes have had it for tonight!

    Mme

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