I urgently need you to revise these sentences. I thank you very much for your help
1) They prophesy that Banquo will be father to a line of kings.
The witches also tell him that no man born of woman can hurt him.
2) What does Shakespeare say (write) in the final couplet of the sonnet?
3) You were requested to talk about Macbeth's main themes without dwelling upon the description of the hero.
True love will continue until doomsday. (the doomsday).
4) He was torn from his mother's womb before he was due to be born.
They confuse the bad with the good.
5) You were requested to write about the witches' prophecies without referring to their presentation at the beginning of the play.
6) This sentence is disconnected from your previous one and lacks the subject. (has mo subject).
7) The most dominant themes are the regicide, the reversal of values, the false appearances and the time.
8) The witches confuse good and bad (the good and the bad/good and evil) and don't know the difference between opposites. They had familiars, animal-shaped spirits that helped them do their magic.
9)The theme of time is linked to the question whether time is preordained or the result of human activity.
1) OK
2) What does Shakespeare write in the final couplet of the sonnet?
3) You were requested to talk about Macbeth's main themes without dwelling upon the description of the hero.
True love will continue until doomsday.
4) OK
5) OK
6) This sentence is disconnected from your previous one and has no subject.
7) The most dominant themes are regicide, reversal of values, false appearances, and time.
8) The witches confuse good and evil and don't know the difference between opposites. They had familiars, animal-shaped spirits that helped them do their magic.
9)The theme of time is linked to the question whether time is preordained or the result of human activity.
Didn't I already read these this afternoon?
1) They predict that Banquo will father a line of kings. The witches also inform him that no man born from a woman can harm him.
To revise the sentence, we can change "prophesy" to "predict" and rephrase the second part to be more concise.
2) What does Shakespeare say in the final couplet of the sonnet?
To revise the sentence, we can replace "write" with "say" to make it more straightforward.
3) You were asked to discuss Macbeth's main themes without focusing on the hero's description.
To revise the sentence, we can change "requested" to "asked" and clarify that the hero's description should not be the main focus.
4) He was prematurely ripped from his mother's womb. They blurred the line between good and bad.
To revise the sentence, we can replace "torn" with "ripped" to make it more impactful. Additionally, we can change "confuse" to "blur" to better convey the idea.
5) You were instructed to write about the witches' prophecies without mentioning their initial presentation in the play.
To revise the sentence, we can replace "requested" with "instructed" and clarify that the initial presentation of the witches should be omitted.
6) This sentence is disconnected from the previous one and lacks a subject.
To revise the sentence, we can specify that the sentence lacks a subject by stating it as "has no subject".
7) The most dominant themes include regicide, the reversal of values, false appearances, and the concept of time.
To revise the sentence, we can include the word "include" to make it more precise and rephrase it to mention the "concept of time" instead of just "time".
8) The witches confuse good and evil and are oblivious to the distinction between opposites. They possess familiars, which are animal-shaped spirits aiding them in their magical practices.
To revise the sentence, we can replace "bad" with "evil" to create a clearer contrast. Additionally, we can rephrase the sentence to clarify the role of familiars.
9) The theme of time explores the question of whether it is predetermined or influenced by human actions.
To revise the sentence, we can replace "linked to" with "explores" and reword the second part to be more concise.