What are the importance of soldiers home between 1865 to present.

Can any one give me some points in the form introduction, 3 body paragraph and conclusion for this essay and i really need help in it.

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This website has basic instructions for writing a 5-paragraph paper.

Here is more information for you:

Follow the writing process, whether you're writing for science, history, English, or whatever:

Prewriting: Brainstorm, research, plan, outline, thesis statement

Writing: Write first draft by starting with section II of your outline; write the introduction after the body of the paper is written; write the conclusion last.

Polishing: Revise, concentrating first on the body of the paper, then the intro, then the concl (revision = making sure ideas are logical and sequential and support your thesis); proofread (spelling, grammar, usage, etc.)

Do you have a thesis yet? Have you done your brainstorming (and maybe research) yet? Have you written an outline?

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Should my thesis statement is that

Soldiers home presented a story of a young man returning from war and the horrific experience of ww1 had removed the solider mind about the cared of his family ,relatives and friends.

Please read your thesis out loud. Ask someone else to read it out loud to you.

As it is now, it doesn't make any sense to me. It's also too long and doesn't follow the directions given for thesis statement.

http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/

In soldier's home, i found three main reason to found its importance between 1865 to present time.

1) World War views
2) Soldiers lives after war
3)Women roles and values during 1914.
how i make this as main idea.

Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you already have) plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)

http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
Read carefully and follow ALL directions.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.

Actually i have prove that this story, Soldier Home should included in our Anthology book whose time period 1865 to present day.

I have to prove it by facts.

Sure! I'd be happy to help you with your essay on the importance of soldiers' homes between 1865 to the present. Here's an outline that you can use to structure your essay:

Introduction:
- Start with a general statement about the significance of soldiers' homes throughout history.
- Provide some brief historical background about soldiers' homes, highlighting their emergence after the American Civil War.
- End the introduction with a clear thesis statement that states the importance of soldiers' homes during this period.

Body Paragraph 1:
- Explain the role of soldiers' homes in providing shelter and care for veterans.
- Discuss how soldiers' homes helped reintegrate veterans into society after the war.
- Highlight the importance of soldiers' homes in providing medical care and rehabilitation services to wounded soldiers.

Body Paragraph 2:
- Discuss how soldiers' homes provided a sense of community and camaraderie for veterans.
- Explain how soldiers' homes facilitated support networks and social activities.
- Provide examples of programs and initiatives offered by soldiers' homes to meet veterans' social needs.

Body Paragraph 3:
- Explain the role of soldiers' homes in addressing the economic challenges faced by veterans.
- Discuss how soldiers' homes provided job training and employment opportunities for veterans.
- Highlight the significance of financial assistance and pensions provided by soldiers' homes.

Conclusion:
- Summarize the main points discussed in the essay, emphasizing the multifaceted importance of soldiers' homes during the period.
- Reinforce the significance of soldiers' homes in providing shelter, care, community, and economic support for veterans.
- Conclude with a final thought about the enduring importance of soldiers' homes and their evolving role in supporting veterans to this day.

Remember, this is just an outline to provide you with a structure for your essay. You can expand on each point and include additional supporting evidence and examples to make your essay more comprehensive.