Spanish 8th grade-Please check

I had to make up a conversation between two people ordering in a restaurant-Is this correct?
Emily ¿Qué tú deseas comer?

Beth: Yo quisiera el puerco con papas y zanahorias.

Emily: ¿Y qué tú quieres beber?

Beth: Yo quisiera agua para tomar. ¿Y qué tú deseas comer?

Emily: Me gusta comer el rosbif. ¿Es el rosbif bueno aquí?

Beth: ¡Sí! Es una de las especialidades de la casa.

Emily: Bueno. Yo quisiera el rosbif con papas y zanahorias.

Beth: ¿Qúe tú quieres beber?

Emily: Yo quisiera beber el café.

They are now eating.
Beth: ¿Te gusta el rosbif, Scott?
Emily: Sí, el rosbif es delicioso.

Emily: ¿Te gusta el puerco?

Beth: Sí,el puerco es muy delicioso.

Emily: ¿Tú quieres pedir postre?
Beth: Sí, yo quiero el flan para el postre.
¿Tú quieres pedir postre?

Emily: No quiero pedir postre. El mesero puede traer la cuenta.
¿Dónde pago la cuenta aquí,Beth? ¿En la mesa?
Beth: Sí, En la mesa.

Emily: Tengo que dejar una buena propina. Me gusta el servicio aquí y el mesero es muy bueno.
Beth: ¡Gracias,Emily!

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  1. Here; Beth: ¿Te gusta el rosbif, Scott?
    Emily: Sí, el rosbif es delicioso.
    You called Emily Scott

    And here;¿Dónde pago la cuenta aquí,Beth? ¿En la mesa?
    Beth: Sí, En la mesa.
    Beth says that Emily should pay in the table.
    It should read; Emily: No voy a pedir postre. El camarero se podrá someter el proyecto de ley.
    ¿Dónde puedo pagar la factura aquí, Beth? ¿Qué mesa?
    Beth: Sí, se paga en esta mesa.

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  2. Thank you-I was going to originally have the conversation between me and a boy and changed the name except there.

    Thanks for your help

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  3. "¿Qué tú deseas comer? " Word order for a question is: VERB + SUBJECT or "¿Qué deseas tú comer?"

    That means about 5 questions to correct.

    The suggestion from Jaydirah "El camarero se podrá someter el proyecto de ley." uses an irregular future. You do not want to do that if you have not yet studied that!

    Always SIMPLIFY what you plan to say, using the vocabulary and the structures (grammar) that you have already studied.

    Feel free to make all the corrections and repost for final proofreading, if you have time!

    Sra

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  4. Emily ¿Qué deseas tú comer?

    Beth: Yo quisiera el puerco con papas y zanahorias.

    Emily: ¿Y qué quieres tú beber?

    Beth: Yo quisiera agua para tomar. ¿Y qué deseas tú comer?

    Emily: Me gusta comer el rosbif. ¿Es el rosbif bueno aquí?

    Beth: ¡Sí! Es una de las especialidades de la casa.

    Emily: Bueno. Yo quisiera el rosbif con papas y zanahorias.

    Beth: ¿Qúe quieres tú beber?

    Emily: Yo quisiera beber el café.

    They are now eating.
    Beth: ¿Te gusta el rosbif, Scott?
    Emily: Sí, el rosbif es delicioso.

    Emily: ¿Te gusta el puerco?

    Beth: Sí,el puerco es muy delicioso.

    Emily: ¿ Quieres tú pedir postre?
    Beth: Sí, yo quiero el flan para el postre.
    ¿ Quieres tú pedir postre?

    Emily: No quiero pedir postre. El mesero puede traer la cuenta.
    ¿Dónde pago la cuenta aquí,Beth? ¿En la mesa?
    Beth: Sí, En la mesa.

    Emily: Tengo que dejar una buena propina. Me gusta el servicio aquí y el mesero es muy bueno.
    Beth: ¡Gracias,Emily!

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