Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis.
Here is my prompt:
1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a timeline for it.
*I really couldn't find a timeline, the only thing I got close to a timeline is 2025, but its not for the accomplishment.
Why Should The U.S. Cut Back On Oil Dependency?
Certainly! I'd be happy to help you proofread your essay and suggest improvements. To begin, let's review the pronoun usage, fragments, title, and thesis.
First, I would need to see the essay itself in order to check the pronoun usage and identify any fragment errors. If you could provide the text of your essay, I can review it for those specific issues.
As for the title and thesis, here are some suggestions based on your prompt:
Title: "Reducing U.S. Dependence on Middle Eastern Oil: A Necessary Step for National Security and Sustainability"
Thesis: "The United States should actively work towards reducing its dependence on Middle Eastern oil due to the vulnerabilities it creates in terms of national security and the adverse environmental impact it has. To achieve this, a comprehensive energy diversification plan should be implemented, which includes increasing investment in renewable energy sources, incentivizing domestic oil production, and promoting energy-efficient technologies. While a specific timeline may be challenging to define, aiming for significant progress by 2025 would be a realistic goal."
Please feel free to provide your essay's text so that I can assist you further.