Could you please check to see if it covers all these factors.
- cost of living on your own
-factors that add to your achievement in the workplace
-educational attainment and earning potential
-current skills and talents and your future route
-benefits/opportunities available to those with post-secondary education
-opportunity trade-offs in leaving school before graduation
Everything seems so perfect, my dreams have fulfilled, and my career is a success. By keeping myself attached to my work, my learning outcomes have proved to be a victory. It all started out with high school, by obtaining good grades in high school, I have been able to pass all classes and graduate with a high school diploma in my hand. My credits came in as a handy tool, as I was able to enter university because of them. I remember my first steps in University; post secondary education allowed me to gain knowledge which helped me to deal with life experiences as well as the obstacles life brings my way. It put me in a social environment, and gave me the chance to meet new and interesting people and allowed me to go through experiences that helped me gain the independence I needed to handle tough situations. It opened a door for me from where I could choose from a variety of choices. My desire was to become a Pharmacist, and with the experience of post secondary education, I have been able to gain the skills and knowledge I had needed for this occupation. I am what I had hoped to become. My occupation as a Pharmacist has settled. My earning potential is very high, and I have started saving this money into my RRSP. I share the same qualities as I did before, when I worked at a grocery store. My attitude is positive towards everything, and I enjoy my job. I love being a Pharmacist; my job at the drugstore is wonderful. I dispense drugs and medicines prescribed by Physicians and health practioners. I learned about medical knowledge at university, and I’m able to inform my customers about the purpose, hazards, and side affects of the drugs I dispense. I am not just able to buy my needs, infact I can purchase as many wants as I can. I have enough money to do what I want, and ofcourse I have left some aside to pay for insurances, taxes, and utilities.
"My earning potential is very high, and I have started saving this money into my RRSP."
You're only putting a small amount of your salary into your retirement account.
You might also mention paying for rent, food, and clothing in the last sentence.
The rest is very good. :-)
Is this better?:
My earning potential is very high, and I have started adding small amounts of my salary into my RRSP.
I am not just able to buy my needs, infact I can purchase as many wants as I can. I have enough money to do what I want, and ofcourse I have left some aside to pay for insurances, taxes, rent, food, and clothing.
( I left utilities out because since Im mentioning rent,--rent includes utilities)
Great! Good job, Sara!
Thanks so much Ms. Sue:D
You're very welcome, Sara!
Based on the provided information, it seems like you have touched upon several factors related to your career success. Let's go through each of the factors you mentioned and explain how they are addressed in your narrative:
1. Cost of living on your own: Although you didn't explicitly mention the cost of living, it can be inferred that your high earning potential as a Pharmacist allows you to comfortably meet your financial needs and have extra money for wants, as you mentioned.
2. Factors that add to your achievement in the workplace: You mentioned that your positive attitude, love for your job, and the skills and knowledge you gained from post-secondary education at university contribute to your success as a Pharmacist. These factors help you excel in your workplace and serve your customers effectively.
3. Educational attainment and earning potential: Your educational journey, starting from high school to pursuing post-secondary education at university, has provided you with the necessary qualifications and knowledge to become a Pharmacist. This occupation carries a high earning potential, which you mentioned as allowing you to save money and meet your financial obligations.
4. Current skills and talents and your future route: Your skills and knowledge gained through your educational journey have shaped your career path and led you to become a Pharmacist. It seems that you have successfully pursued your desired occupation and achieved your career goals.
5. Benefits/opportunities available to those with post-secondary education: Post-secondary education opens doors to various career choices and provides opportunities for personal and professional growth. It allows individuals to gain specialized knowledge and skills that are valuable in the job market, as you mentioned in relation to becoming a Pharmacist.
6. Opportunity trade-offs in leaving school before graduation: Although you didn't explicitly mention leaving school before graduation, your narrative emphasizes the importance of completing your high school education and pursuing post-secondary education to achieve your desired career as a Pharmacist. It implies that staying in school and completing your education has been beneficial for your success.
Overall, based on the factors you mentioned and the details in your narrative, it appears that you have covered various aspects related to your career success and how these factors contribute to your achievements in the workplace. Congratulations on fulfilling your dreams and finding success in your chosen occupation!