I have a few more sentences on Dorian's death I'd like you to check. Thank you.
1)Dorian throws himself on the sofa and starts thinking of his past. He recognizes he has filled his mind with corruption, committed horrible crimes and has exerted an evil influence on others.
2) He admits beauty and youth have only caused his ruin. Bauty has been but a mask to him and youth but a mockery.
3) Then he remembers Hetty, the beautiful and charming country girl, whom he met in a village and had a romance with.
4) She was very much like Sybil, knew nothing of him and thought he was an angel.
5) They were to go away together , which would have meant the girl's ruin by Victorian standards since Dorian didn't have the intention to marry her. He eventually spared her and, at the last minute, did not elope with her.
6) He did one good thing since he protected her reputation and didn't ruin her her innocence. (He left her as flower-like as he found her).
7)He cheers himself by thinking of his recent good action. As he did one good thing he wonders if the portrait has changed. While looking at the picture a cry of pain and indignation comes from him.
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... Dorian didn't have any intention of marrying her. <~~idiomatic wording
1) It seems that Dorian is reflecting on his past actions and the state of his mind, acknowledging that he has allowed corruption to fill his thoughts and has committed terrible crimes. He also realizes that his influence on others has been evil.
To check the sentences for accuracy, you can refer back to the original source material, such as the novel "The Picture of Dorian Gray" by Oscar Wilde. Review the relevant chapters or sections where Dorian's thoughts and reflections on his actions are described. Cross-checking the text will help ensure the accuracy of the statements.
2) Dorian acknowledges that his obsession with beauty and youth has been detrimental to him, leading to his downfall. He sees beauty as merely a mask and youth as a mocking illusion.
To verify the accuracy of this statement, you can refer to passages in the book where Dorian contemplates the consequences of his pursuit of eternal youth and his vanity regarding appearance. Look for moments in which he expresses regret or recognizes the negative impact of his preoccupation with superficial attributes.
3) Dorian recalls a woman named Hetty, a beautiful and charming country girl with whom he had a romantic relationship after meeting her in a village.
To ensure the accuracy of this statement, you can revisit parts of the novel that mention Dorian's encounters with Hetty. Look for passages that describe their interactions and any emotional connection that develops between them.
4) Dorian remarks that Hetty resembled Sybil, an earlier love interest, and that she was unaware of his true character, thinking of him as an angel.
To verify the statement's accuracy, you can review the sections in which Sybil and Dorian's relationship is discussed, along with any passages that mention Hetty's perception of Dorian and her resemblance to Sybil.
5) Dorian and Hetty had planned to elope together, but Dorian ultimately prevents this from happening, recognizing that it would lead to the girl's ruin based on Victorian social standards. This decision saves her from potential harm or societal judgment.
To fact-check this statement, refer to the relevant parts of the book that depict Dorian's decision regarding the elopement with Hetty. Look for paragraphs or conversations that reveal his reasoning behind sparing her and any internal conflicts he experiences in making this choice.
6) Dorian considers his protection of Hetty's reputation and innocence as a good deed. He describes leaving her as "flower-like" and preserving her integrity.
To verify the accuracy of this statement, look for sections in the book where Dorian's thoughts reflect his understanding of the impact his decision had on Hetty's reputation. Pay attention to any descriptions or sentiments that emphasize her innocence being maintained.
7) While contemplating his recent good action, Dorian wonders if his selfless act has changed the portrait of himself. However, as he looks at the picture, he experiences a cry of pain and indignation.
To confirm the accuracy of this statement, consult the relevant chapters or passages where Dorian examines the portrait and reflects on his actions. Look for instances where he observes any change or lack thereof in the painting and his emotional reaction to it.