An apple a day keeps the doctor a day.
This seems to be true, but you must eat an aple together with the skin of the apple. There are a lo of antioxidents in the skin of an apple, so if you peel the skin and do not it, this proverb doesn't apply.
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I wrote the explanation of the proverb. Would you let me know there are any errors in the sentences above?
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Line 2, be sure to check the spelling of "apple" Line 3, you forgot the "t" in "lot." Line 4, the verb is missing "and do not eat it,"
"...the doctor a day. " should be away.
Certainly! I can help review the sentences for any errors. Here are some suggestions to improve the clarity:
"An apple a day keeps the doctor away. This proverb seems to be true, but it is important to eat the apple with its skin. The skin of an apple contains a lot of antioxidants, so if you peel the apple and do not eat the skin, the benefits implied by this proverb may not apply."
Overall, the sentences are clear and convey the intended message. One minor correction is to replace "a day" with "away" in the proverb to maintain the correct meaning. Additionally, mentioning that the benefits of the proverb may not apply unless the skin is eaten helps to clarify the importance of including the apple's skin in one's diet.