Please check and make sure my words are spelled correct and I have commas where they need to be.If not please correct it for me.Also do I suppose to capitalize smothers canning fortune.
Please let me know whether you want to go by air or drive to the meeting in Chicago. If you decide to go by air, I must alter our arrangements to stop and see Mr. Joseph Howell.
Mr. Howell has expressed an interest in investing in the shopping center project. In addition to being a successful businessman on his own, Mr. Howell was recently named an heir to the smothers canning fortune. I think he is probably one of the best prospects available to us at this time. If you decide to fly to Chicago it will be necessary to make other arrangements to see Mr. Howell, in the very near future.
Smothers (proper name is capitalized)
If you decide to fly to Chicago,
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Please let me know whether you want to go by air or drive to the meeting in Chicago. If you decide to go by air, I must alter our arrangements to stop and see Mr. Joseph Howell.
Mr. Howell has expressed an interest in investing in the shopping center project. In addition to being a successful businessman on his own, Mr. Howell was recently named an heir to the Smothers Canning fortune. I think he is probably one of the best prospects available to us at this time. If you decide to fly to Chicago, it will be necessary to make other arrangements to see Mr. Howell in the very near future.
Correction:
- "Also do I suppose to capitalize smothers canning fortune." should be "Also, am I supposed to capitalize Smothers Canning fortune."