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In the message portion of your Discussion post, start by writing one general sentence about a topic
After your one general sentence, write three or four sentences that add specifics to your description

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  1. What is your topic?

    What is a general sentence about it?

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    Ms. Sue
  2. I don't have one

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  3. Today is a good day

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  4. That's your first sentence.

    Now write three or four sentences telling the reader why today is good.

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  5. Because me and my family are bless to be alive today. Today is such a pretty day. An know one are messing with me are calling me today.

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  6. Let's see what your paragraph looks like in standard English.

    Today is a good day. It's really a pretty day. My family and I are blessed to be alive. In addition, no one is messing with me or calling me today.

    A few tips for the next time you write.

    1. Do not begin a sentence with "because" or "and."
    2. You wouldn't say "me am blessed to be alive." So you can't say "me and my family are blessed . . ."
    3. Note the spelling of:
    no one
    and
    or

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  7. Thank you Ms. Sue

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  8. You're welcome!

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