Please make the correction so that my paper is error free.
Dear Ms. Powell
Thank you for your order. The enclosed invoice indicted that the shipment was sent under separate covers. This shipment includes all volumes except the final volume that is being represented. The new edition of this volume will be ship within the next 10 days. We’re confident that this edition to your library will prove to be a truly a time sever in your research.
Up-keep services will be sent automatically in order to keep your library current. If you would like advance notice before we ship any supplement please return the enclosed card.
If we can be of further service do not hesitate to contact us.
Very truly yours,
Audrey Webster
Sales Department
indicted = indicated
covers = cover
ship = shipped
edition = addition
be a truly a time server = be truly a time saver
up-keep = up-date?
supplement, please
service, do not
Sra
why would i use addition instead of edition.
It is saying that the new edition will be shipped within the next ten days.
Dear Ms. Powell,
Thank you for your order. The enclosed invoice indicates that the shipment was sent under separate covers. This shipment includes all volumes except the final volume that is being represented. The new edition of this volume will be shipped within the next 10 days. We are confident that this edition will prove to be a truly time-saving resource for your research.
Upkeep services will be sent automatically to keep your library current. If you would like advance notice before we ship any supplements, please return the enclosed card.
If we can be of further service, do not hesitate to contact us.
Very truly yours,
Audrey Webster
Sales Department
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