I'm hoping this is a better thesis statement, please let me know.

"Although most Schools of Pharmacy have added cultural competency training to their curriculum, not all have added the Service learning experience, which should be a requirement for all schools which would involve hands on experience dealing with patients of different cultural backgrounds helping pharmacists to better communicate with their patients.

I think I know what you're getting at with this idea. I think you believe there's a problem with communication between pharmacists (as they are now trained) and patients who are not culturally compatible (for lack of a better word) with those pharmacists.

Think about these things, even though your answers to these questions would go into your paper, but not necessarily into your thesis statement.

1. Is there a communication problem between pharmacists and some of their patients? If so, how does the problem manifest itself?

2. What is involved in the "Service learning experience" that would address solving communication problems you believe are in existence?

3. What kinds of communication need to improve?

Once you have those ideas firmly in your mind, reread your statement above. Which part of that statement are you most passionate about? Which part needs to be the center of what you are trying to prove in your paper?