is this grammar, mechanics, and usage correct?

January 16, 2011

SUBWAY: Franchisor

As a potential franchisee, I am investigating Subway operations. With your experience, you can provide the kind of information I need.

I have so many questions I would like to ask you, can you help me answer some of these questions?

• Did you encounter any unforeseen costs when you were first starting up your franchise?
• Did you have trouble fitting into the franchise mold?
• How much say did you have in the location/size of your store?
• How long did it take you to start making a profit?
• How many hours a week do you work?
• Did you have any costs that are not covered by the franchise fee?
• How do you calculate royalty and advertising feed?
• How much say do you have in choosing suppliers?
• Did Subway’s advertising programs satisfy your needs?
• How much did Subway help you in the beginning?

I would be grateful if you can help me. You can contact me either at home or on my cell phone, day or evening.

Sincerely,

Potential franchisee
918- 555-9983 (Home)
918- 555-8838 (Cell)

Enclosure

This is a run-on. How can you fix it:

I have so many questions I would like to ask you, can you help me answer some of these questions?

Is the last word correct??

How do you calculate royalty and advertising feed?

Yes, the grammar, mechanics, and usage in the given text are correct. The letter follows standard letter format, including the date and proper salutation. The sentences are clear, and the punctuation is used correctly.

To answer the questions listed in the letter, you would need to reach out to the franchisor or someone with experience in Subway operations who can provide the necessary information. The letter asks for help in answering the questions, and it provides contact information (the potential franchisee's home and cell phone numbers).

If you are the potential franchisee, you may consider sending the letter to the franchisor or contacting them directly to initiate a conversation and obtain the answers to your questions.