Thank you very much for your corrections. Here are the last sentences of the day. Thank you.
1)Are the following clothing items correct: a patterned cotton t-shirt, a navy blue turtleneck sweater, a big black silver watch with a green screen (?), white tight jeans (or tight white jeans?), a t-shirt with a picture (?) of the Dire Straits, a red and white Christmas cap.
2)As you were running out of cartridge, some of your writing is unreadable and therefore not assessable. (cannot be given a mark)
3)A third-person narrator knows everything about the character and it is called omniscient.
4) It can be defined as obtrusive if he makes personal remarks and comments about (on?) the events or unobtrusive if it doesn’t.
5) The media and the advertising can have an influence on the way we dress. In fact people often wear clothes or accessories worn by the stars of cinema and music industry.
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1) Are the following clothing items correct: a patterned cotton t-shirt, a navy blue turtleneck sweater, a big black silver watch with a green screen (?), white tight jeans (or tight white jeans?), a t-shirt with a picture (?) of the Dire Straits, a red and white Christmas cap.
To determine the correctness of the clothing items, we can break down each item:
- A patterned cotton t-shirt: This description seems fine. A t-shirt made of cotton with a pattern on it.
- A navy blue turtleneck sweater: This description is also accurate. A sweater with a turtleneck collar in the color navy blue.
- A big black silver watch with a green screen (?): This description may need clarification. Are you referring to a watch that is big, black, and silver with a green screen? If so, the description is acceptable.
- White tight jeans (or tight white jeans?): The word order may vary depending on personal preference. Both "white tight jeans" and "tight white jeans" are grammatically correct.
- A t-shirt with a picture (?) of the Dire Straits: This description is unclear due to the question mark. Are you uncertain about whether it is a picture of the Dire Straits or something else? Without further information, it's difficult to determine the correctness.
- A red and white Christmas cap: This description seems accurate. A cap in the colors red and white, commonly associated with Christmas.
2) As you were running out of cartridge, some of your writing is unreadable and therefore not assessable (cannot be given a mark).
It seems like you are describing a situation where someone's writing became illegible due to a low ink cartridge in their pen or printer. The sentence itself is grammatically correct and conveys the intended meaning.
3) A third-person narrator knows everything about the character and it is called omniscient.
The statement is accurate. In literature, a third-person narrator with knowledge of all the characters' thoughts, feelings, and actions is referred to as an omniscient narrator. This type of narrator has comprehensive knowledge of the story and can provide insights into multiple characters.
4) It can be defined as obtrusive if he makes personal remarks and comments about (on?) the events or unobtrusive if it doesn’t.
The sentence is correct, but there is a slight confusion with the preposition. The correct preposition to use in this sentence is "about." So the sentence should read: "It can be defined as obtrusive if he makes personal remarks and comments about the events or unobtrusive if it doesn't." This sentence explains that if the narrator makes personal remarks and comments about the events in the story, they can be considered obtrusive, while if the narrator refrains from doing so, they can be considered unobtrusive.
5) The media and advertising can have an influence on the way we dress. In fact, people often wear clothes or accessories worn by the stars of the cinema and music industry.
The statement is accurate. The media and advertising play a significant role in shaping fashion trends and influencing people's style choices. It is common for individuals to emulate the clothing and accessories worn by celebrities from the cinema and music industry.