Can you pleas check these sentences for me, please? Thank you.
1) Your sentences are either confused or do not make sense at all. You mixed tenses, gender and even invented words! I think you should re-write each paragraph checking in your literaure book the underlined words.
2)The tales are about many different characters with the exception of the nobles and the poor-class people.
3) The formerr would have agreed to travel with the latter whereas the latter couldn't have afforded the expense of such a trip.
3)The English Renaissanc developd later than the Italian. It started when Henr VIII ascended the throne.
4)Monasteries turned into centres of culture in the Middle Ages but they will not replace grammar schools or universities.
5)Man had the function of linking God to the other animate and inanimate elements.
6) Both the Italian and the English Renaissance were characterized by a revival of classical culture which goes under the name of Humanism. The name Humanism was chosen because of the growing importance of the individual.
7) Do not make up words yourself.
Chaucer describes the natural elements like for example the rain, that pierces the draught of March.
8) The pilgrimage begins at Tabard Inn and ends at Canterbury Cathedral, where the shrine of Thomas Becket is kept (??)
3. formerr = former? and Henr should be either Henri (French) or Henry (English)
3. Renaissanc = Rennaissance + developd = developed (also)
8. if you don't like "is kept" you could use "is found?"
Sra
1) Upon reviewing your sentences, it seems that there are some issues. In the first sentence, you have mixed tenses and genders, and even used some invented words. To improve this, I recommend re-writing each paragraph and checking for the correct usage of tenses and genders. You can refer to your literature book to verify the usage of any underlined words.
2) The second sentence seems to be grammatically correct. It states that the tales discuss various characters except for the nobles and the poor-class people. No improvements are necessary for this sentence.
3) The third sentence has a minor issue. It should be "The former would have agreed to travel with the latter..." instead of "The formerr would have agreed to travel with the latter...". Additionally, the latter couldn't have afforded the expense of such a trip. This sentence is correctly structured and doesn't require any further changes.
4) The fourth sentence has a factual error. It should be "The English Renaissance developed later than the Italian Renaissance." Additionally, it started when Henry VIII ascended the throne. This sentence can be improved by correcting the factual information.
5) The fifth sentence seems to be grammatically correct. It states that monasteries turned into centers of culture in the Middle Ages but did not replace grammar schools or universities. No further improvements are necessary for this sentence.
6) The sixth sentence is well-structured and doesn't require any changes. It correctly states that both the Italian and the English Renaissance were characterized by a revival of classical culture known as Humanism. The name "Humanism" was chosen due to the increasing importance of the individual.
7) The seventh sentence is advising against making up words. No improvements are necessary for this sentence.
8) The eighth sentence has a minor question mark placement issue. It should be "The pilgrimage begins at Tabard Inn and ends at Canterbury Cathedral, where the shrine of Thomas Becket is kept." No further improvements are necessary for this sentence.
Please note that the suggested improvements are based on grammatical and factual correctness.