I need help writing a welcome page for a website. Is this text ok ( when it comes to spelling, grammar and common sence ). This is for my school. Does it sound legal and do all the words sound legal enough.:
Welcome to the Johnson Law Office website
The goal of Johnson Law Office is to provide quality and prompt legal assistance with the respect of the highest standards of the legal profession. Providing a legal assistance to our clients is based on individual approach and thorough analysis in order to resolve problems within the limits of the legal system. Our clients are offered services in all legal areas, in the form of legal advice, drafting of legal documents and representation.
The goal of Johnson Law Office is to provide quality and prompt legal assistance according to the highest standards of the legal profession. Providing a legal assistance to our clients is based on our individual approach and thorough analysis in order to resolve problems within the limits of the legal system. Our clients are offered services in all legal areas: legal advice, drafting of legal documents, and representation.
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Welcome to the Johnson Law Office website.
The Johnson Law Office is dedicated to providing exceptional legal assistance of the highest professional standards. Our primary goal is to offer prompt and high-quality legal services to our clients. We believe in taking an individualized approach to each case and conducting thorough analyses to effectively address and resolve legal issues within the limits of the legal system.
Our diverse range of services covers all areas of law, including legal advice, the drafting of legal documents, and representation.