please I need help to check if my sentence or paragraph correct with five adjectives and five adverbs. I also need to compare the event to similar by using at least three comparatives and three superatives.
I recently watched a "lovely old movie called "The Perils of Pauline" which is an adventurous comedy about a young and beautiful girl named Pauline who lives with her old spinster Aunt on a large estate.
Pauline is in love with a tall and handsome young man named George who inspires Pauline to "fearlessly" run away from home to avoid marring a wealthy and "incredibly" fat banker that her old Aunt has "mercilessly" selected for her.
Pauline "courageously" escapes from her bedroom window on a winter night only to fall into the dangers of the world. When George realize what pauline has done, he follows her trail around the world in other to rescue her from the adventures and troubles tha she is pulled into by people who are not as naive and trusting as pauline.
It seems that when George realize where Pauline is, she disappear quickly again to find herself in another coutry and completely mixed up with criminals and or trouble.
The ending, however, is a happy and romatic one. George finally reaches his true love and they get married. Pauline Aunt also comes to regret her actions and invite George to live with them. The last scene of the charming couple leaving on their honeymoon.
Please list the
adjectives
adverbs
superlatives
comparatives
Be sure you remove all quotation marks. All of them.
Movie titles should be in italics, not in quotation marks.
Once you have listed which words fit which category, as Ms. Sue asked above, please repost.
Let's review your sentence or paragraph to check if it is correct and how you can incorporate five adjectives and five adverbs. We will also look at how we can compare the event to similar situations using comparatives and superlatives.
Here is your paragraph with the requested modifications:
I recently watched a lovely old movie called "The Perils of Pauline," which is an adventurous comedy about a young and beautiful girl named Pauline who lives with her old spinster Aunt on a sprawling estate. Pauline is deeply in love with a tall and exceptionally handsome young man named George, who inspires her to fearlessly run away from home to avoid marrying a wealthy and incredibly fat banker that her old Aunt has mercilessly selected for her.
Pauline courageously escapes from her bedroom window on a winter night, only to fall into the perils of the world. When George realizes what Pauline has done, he bravely follows her trail around the world to rescue her from the adventures and troubles that she is drawn into by people who are not as naive and trusting as she is.
It seems that every time George finds out where Pauline is, she quickly disappears again, finding herself in another country and becoming completely entangled with criminals or trouble. Despite these challenges, the ending of the movie is a blissfully happy and romantic one. George finally reaches his true love, and they get married. Pauline's Aunt also comes to regret her actions and invites George to live with them. The last scene shows the charming couple leaving on their honeymoon.
In the revised paragraph, I have added some adjectives and adverbs to enhance the description and provide more detail. Here are the five adjectives: lovely, old, young, beautiful, and wealthy. And here are the five adverbs: fearlessly, incredibly, mercilessly, deeply, and bravely.
Now, let's explore how we can compare the event to similar situations using comparatives and superlatives. Comparatives are used to compare two things, while superlatives are used to compare three or more things. Here are three comparative examples and three superlative examples for your paragraph:
Comparatives:
1. Pauline is more adventurous than most girls her age.
2. George is braver than anyone else in the movie.
3. The dangers Pauline faces are even greater than she anticipated.
Superlatives:
1. Pauline is the bravest character in the entire movie.
2. George is the most handsome man Pauline has ever met.
3. The ending of the movie is the happiest and most romantic scene.
By incorporating these comparisons, you can add depth and emphasis to the similarities and differences between the events in the movie and other similar situations.
I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any further questions.