Please correct my sentence english is not my native language and I don't feel comfortable to turn in. Also my Summary and Anecdote. Thank u very much!
(Anecdote)
She lives in land that almost has the same climate in the desert. Starvation is not something new to her as she suffers it daily. Moving away from home to another town is not new to her as show runs away from the gown shots that took her family way.
Impatiently she waits and fancies to be in a country with no civil war and their citizen endure nothing but a peace.
All of the sudden she sees a foreign ships coming to her country’s seas, fishing illegally and dumping toxic wastes.
Due to dumping toxic she begins to suffer from skin radiation, her aunt bores malformed babies and her uncle is jobless because of overfishing. Now young girls hope is gone, perished with the wind.
She sits and says “Why would they bring corruption to my country, its already corrupted. And she wonders why her uncle is all of the sudden famous across the globe.
One of the most top controversial topics in the world, especially in the west is Somali pirates hijacking European ships that go to Somali coast. They captured the world’s attention by threading and capturing any European ships they see nearby the Somali. The world’s government decided to declare war on the Somali pirates.
(Thesis)
Justice is not being severed in the case of the Somali pirates and truth is being hindered from others about the Somali pirates and how they emerged to be in the beginning.
Around 1991, The Somali government collapsed and ever since then Somali became of the most corrupted country in the world. The Somali also suffered from starvation then and now.
In the view of this surreptitiously, some western ships started to come to the Somali coastline and fish illegally. When it is overfished, it really affects the lives of the Somali people since they depend on selling the fishes in order to support their families.
Due to this issue, Somali people complained especially the fishermen to the United Nations but they didn’t receive any replies from the United Nations.
Since the coastline of Somali is rich in tuna, still the Western ships sought its opportunity especially the Spanish ships selling seafood and taking out lobsters, shrimps.
At one time, the Somali pirates seized the Spanish tuna fishing boat Alakran which was thought to fish illegally. According to news.bbc a Daybad, Somali pirates said,”We’ve had no government for 18 years. We have no life. Our last resource is the sea and the foreign trawlers are plundering our fish.”
By year Somali loses 94 million dollars to illegal fishing and on annual basis there have been 700 to 1,000 boats fishing illegally. Ahmedou Ould-Abdullah said, “Because there is no effective government in Somali, there is so much irregular fishing from European and Asian countries.” The UN representative for Somali.
Top of that, Westerns started to dump nuclear waste in the Somali seas. Dumping vast barrels into the Somali seas made the Somali people suffer more than they were only suffering.
Since medication is too expensive and people can’t afford it, More than 300 Somalis died, thousands suffered from unusual skin radiation, and malformed babies. This indeed is unfair and uncalled for.
Why would anyone go to another country that is already corrupted, its people are in the devastation periods of their lives and bring distraction into their lives? Over 3.2 million Somalis are in desperate need of aid and 25 percent of the Somali children die under the age of five years old. This is doubtlessly injustice to shorten those kids’ lives by dumping toxic wastes on the environment they live in. The UN has described the level of human suffering and deprivation in Somali as “shocking” yet the UN decided to not pay attention when the fishermen called their attention to the injustice of the European and Asia ships.
Instead of exposing the Europeans piracy in terms of illegal fishing and dumping toxic wastes on the Somali waters, the UN decides to send forces to Somali to defend the Somali pirates. The Somali pirates are greatly misunderstand in the Western world, fortunately only those that posses powerful and few individuals know how the Somali pirates emerged.
The local fishermen became angry when they saw what the western people were doing to their people and to their waters. Abdirahman Ibbi, said that. “Estimated 220 foreign owned vessels were still engaged in unlicensed and illegal fishing in Somali waters, most of them European origin. A deputy prime minister and minister of fishier and the new Somali national unity government.
For the betterment of their country and its people, the fishermen’s developed clique and began to defend and guard the coastline of Somali. They started gather onto small speedboats and capture any western ships that go to Somali coastline without permission and demand money in order to free them.
Half of the money they get goes to cleaning the toxic wastes. Nevertheless, this should not give justification to the Somali pirates to hijack any ships that they see; however, the European ships had no right to go to another country and dump its toxic wastes in order to profit and not care about the consequences of their actions.
Before hand, the Somali pirates were ordinary men who sold fishes for living, they wanted to save their environment from dumpers and dissuade the ships from taking the seafood’s. Abdulla said, “There is no doubt that there is illegal fishing by the Asia and Europe. During meeting with command of the EU’s Atalanta mission in Mombassa, Kenya.
(Summary)
These acts should not continue and should be stopped immediately. Not only the Somali people and the Somali waters are being affected but also the world’s water is being poised.
A worldwide aid is needed as soon as possible to stop dumping toxic on waters and endangering others in order to profit. Surely radioactive waste will harm the lives of individuals, poison the seafood’s.
A great lesson from this is the Somali people; it had a huge impact on their lives and their lives are changed forever. Babies will be forever malformed, people are enduring skin radiation and the died ones will never return to their families nor to their homes.
...in a land.....as the desert
???show runs away from the gown shots??? = she runs away...from the shots (sorry, I can't figure out what you need.....away
and where their citizens endure nothing but peace
All of a sudden, she sees foreign ships...
dumping toxic waste.....aunt bears...young girls' hope...
to my country;it's.....all of a sudden...
the Somali coast...threading OR threatening...
not severed BUT served...they emerged in the beginning...
became the most corrupted...
In view of this, some western ships started surreptitiously to come...usually fish as plural (not fishes)
the Somali people complained, especially the fishermen,.....
Decide of you want western or Western
not bbc but BBC
Not By year, but Each year...on an annual basis "The UN representative for Somali." = is an incomplete sentence. IT needs a verb
On top of that,...they wee already suffering.
more = not capitalized
devastation period...
Europeans' piracy...world; fortunately"An estimated..."most of them of European origin. "A deputy prime minister, etc. is another incomplete sentence.... minister of fisheries?
...the fishermen developed a clique...They started to gather into small
...usual "toxic waste" and not wastes...dump their toxic waste
sold fish for a living....seafood. Du rig a meeting...(incomplete sentence)
not poised but poisoned
dumping toxic waste on waters ....individuals and poison the seafood.the dead ones *not died*
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(Anecdote)
She lives in a land that has a climate similar to the desert. Starvation is a daily struggle for her as she experiences it regularly. Moving away from home to another town is nothing new for her, as she often flees from the gunfire that has taken her family away.
Impatiently she waits and dreams of living in a country free from civil war, where its citizens only know peace.
Suddenly, she sees foreign ships arriving in her country's waters, fishing illegally and dumping toxic waste.
Due to the dumping of toxins, she begins to suffer from skin radiation, her aunt gives birth to malformed babies, and her uncle is left unemployed due to overfishing. Now, the young girl's hope is gone, disappearing with the wind.
She sits and wonders, "Why would they bring corruption to my country when it's already corrupted?" She also questions why her uncle has suddenly become famous across the globe.
(Thesis)
The justice system fails in the case of the Somali pirates, and the truth about their emergence is concealed from the rest of the world.
Around 1991, the Somali government collapsed, turning Somalia into one of the most corrupt countries in the world. The people of Somalia have also faced ongoing starvation during this time.
In a covert manner, some Western ships began coming to the Somali coastline and engaging in illegal fishing. Overfishing directly affects the lives of the Somali people, as they depend on selling fish to support their families.
Despite complaints, particularly from fishermen, to the United Nations about this issue, no response was received.
Given that the Somali coastline is rich in tuna, Western ships, especially those from Spain, took advantage of the situation by selling seafood and depleting marine resources such as lobsters and shrimps.
At one point, Somali pirates seized a Spanish tuna fishing boat called Alakran, which was suspected of fishing illegally. According to BBC News, a Somali pirate named Daybad stated, "We've had no government for 18 years. We have no life. Our last resource is the sea, and the foreign trawlers are plundering our fish."
Somalia loses $94 million annually due to illegal fishing, with an estimated 700 to 1,000 boats fishing unlawfully each year. Ahmedou Ould-Abdullah, the UN representative for Somalia, noted, "Because there is no effective government in Somalia, there is so much irregular fishing from European and Asian countries."
Furthermore, Western nations began dumping nuclear waste in the Somali seas. This further exacerbated the suffering of the Somali people who couldn't afford expensive medical treatment. Over 300 Somalis died, thousands experienced unusual skin radiation, and babies were born with deformities. This is unjust and unacceptable.
The dumping of toxic waste in a country already dealing with corruption and devastation raises the question: Why would anyone bring further destruction to a country struggling to survive? More than 3.2 million Somalis desperately need aid, and 25 percent of Somali children die before the age of five. It is an injustice to shorten these children's lives by polluting the environment in which they live. Though the UN has described the level of suffering in Somalia as "shocking," they chose not to address the injustice caused by European and Asian ships, instead sending forces to protect the Somali pirates. The Somali pirates are greatly misunderstood in the Western world, but only a few individuals with power truly understand how they started.
Local fishermen became angered by the actions of Western ships in their waters. Abdirahman Ibbi, the deputy prime minister and minister of fisheries of the new Somali national unity government, stated that an estimated 220 foreign-owned vessels were engaging in unlicensed and illegal fishing in Somali waters, most of which were of European origin.
In order to protect their country and their people, the fishermen formed a group and began defending and guarding the Somali coastline. They would gather on small speedboats and capture any Western ships that entered Somali waters without permission, demanding ransom money in order to release them.
Half of the money they acquired from the ransom went towards cleaning up the toxic waste. However, this does not justify the Somali pirates hijacking any ship they come across. The European ships had no right to enter another country and dump toxic waste for profit without considering the consequences of their actions.
Initially, the Somali pirates were ordinary fishermen trying to make a living. They wanted to protect their environment from pollutants and prevent the illegal taking of seafood. Abdulla, during a meeting with the command of the EU's Atalanta mission in Mombasa, Kenya, stated, "There is no doubt that there is illegal fishing by Asia and Europe."
(Summary)
These actions must be stopped immediately. It not only affects the Somali people and their waters but also poses a threat to the world's water.
Global aid is urgently needed to halt the dumping of toxic waste and prevent further endangerment for the sake of profit. Radioactive waste will undoubtedly harm individuals' lives and contaminate seafood.
The impact on the lives of the Somali people is significant and irreversible. Babies will suffer from permanent birth defects, individuals will endure skin radiation, and those who have died will never return to their families or homes.