Can you please check if the following sentences summarising part of the film Frankenstein are possible?
1) Though the town is affected by cholera Victor decides not to abandon his work.
2) His work comes even before his beloved Elizabeth, who tries to dissuade him from staying in town.
3) Elizabeth has no choice but to run away and Victor’s friend follows her. Meanwhile Victor continues his experiment and is thrilled at the idea of giving birth to a human being.
4) All of a sudden, he hears a noise coming from the test tube and glances at it. He realises his creation is alive and is horrified by his loathsome appearance.
5) His face is transfigured by numerous scars. His bold head is furrowed (?) in the middle (?) by a deep scar.
6) He can’t believe his eyes and asks himself what he has done. Victor rushes away in his bedchamber, where he eventually falls asleep only to be tormented by a terrifying dream.
7) The monster flees away through the streets infested by cholera. He tries to steal a loaf of bread but is followed by an angry crowd.
1. If you are reading this outloud. you would appreciate a comma after " cholera,"...
5. Is that a "bold" or "bald" head?
Sra