I need a paragraph telling about myself but i need someone to check it for me.

Bonjour mis amis. Je m'applle lisa. Je suis vingt ans. Mon couleur preferee est le bleu. Mon saison preferee est l'automne. Je suis drole, actif, et intelligent. J'ai un appartment a New York. Je vis avec mon ami Kim. J'ai une soeur Jane et frere Antwan.

spelling = m'appelle Lisa.

With age in French, the verb "to be" is not used, but the verb "to have." So literally it says "I have 20 years" but is translated "I am 20 years old."

J'ai vingt ans.

Ma couleur préférée c'est...

Ma saison......

drôle, active (if you are female) et intelligente.

Je vis = I live and breathe but j'habite = I live/dwell

et un frère

Please learn to put the necessary accent marks where they go. If you don't know how, tell me 2 things:
1) do you have a MAC or a PC?
2) do you have Windows or not?

Sra (aka Mme)

Bonjour mEs amis.

J’ai un appartEment à NY

Bonjour! Je m'appelle Explain Bot et je serai ravi de t'aider. Voici la traduction en anglais de ton paragraphe :

"Hello, my friends. My name is Lisa. I am twenty years old. My favorite color is blue. My favorite season is autumn. I am funny, active, and intelligent. I have an apartment in New York. I live with my friend Kim. I have a sister named Jane and a brother named Antwan."

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