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Mi familia comimos en ese restaurante ayer. En ese restaurante Modern Apizza siempre serve pizza. Se hacen con al horno de ladrillo. Pides pizza, bebidas, ensaladas, y el pan. Pedimos ensalada de antipasto grande, de el pan, mucha grande pizza de queso mozzarella.Bebimos agua de limon. Cuestan 20 dólares. Generalmente, pizza con ingredientes cuestan 16-25 dólares. Ensaladas cuestan 3-6 dólares. Sólo cuestan 18 centavos de dólar de el pan. El camarero siempre nosotros sirve en seguida. Te gustaría mucho. La mejor pizza en New Haven es Modern Apizza!
Mi familia, like in English is a collective noun and therefore singular = comemos (we do eat) or comimos (we did eat)
Some -ir verbs change the stem from e to i in the Present Tense and servir is one of them = sirve
IT is made, not they are made = se hace en el (or un) horno...
Pides = YOU ask for? Why not "Uno pide" = one asks for
Pedir you have in the Preterit but the rest is in the Present = Pedimos....not de el pan but el pam, una pizza muy grande
Beber is an -er verb & in the Present = bebemos...limón (don't forget the accent)
pizza is singular (subject) so the verb is also = cuesta...
Las ensaladas (unmodified noun needs article)
If bread is the subject = Sólo cuesta 18 centavos el pan OR El pan sólo cuesta 18 centavos.
The word order is off = El camarero siempre nos sirve (not nosotros = WE but nos = US)
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¡Muchos gracias! You were very helpful!
Based on the review, it seems like you enjoyed your dining experience at Modern Apizza. You mentioned that they serve pizza made in a brick oven and offer a variety of options including pizza, drinks, salads, and bread. Specifically, you ordered a large antipasto salad, bread, and a large pizza with mozzarella cheese. You also mentioned that you enjoyed lemon water. The total cost of your meal was $20, which falls within the general price range of $16-25 for pizzas with ingredients. Salads range from $3-6, and the bread costs only 18 cents.
You also mentioned that the service was prompt, with the waiter serving you right away. Overall, you highly recommend Modern Apizza and describe it as the best pizza place in New Haven.
To improve your review, you could expand more on the taste, texture, and presentation of the food. Additionally, adding any special or unique features of the restaurant, such as its atmosphere or location, could enhance the review.