I was wondering if someone could look over this softcopy resume

Nicole Medina


Campus Address Permanent Address
Education
[Click here and state your degree earned, year graduated, school attended]
Courses Related to Major:

Cake Decorator
I started training to be a decorator in 2003.
I became a part time decorator about a year later in 2004.
Now in 2007 I am a full time decorator.

Other Bakery/Deli experience
I also know how to bake pies, work a meat-slicer, work in a fast past environment, and do well with customers.
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Experience
ShopRite of West Haverstraw- Bakery
45 S Route 9W, West Haverstraw - (845) 947-1624

ShopRite of Garniville- Bakery ( decorator)
38 W Ramapo Rd, Garnerville - (845) 429-3602

Luna Café- Counter help (shut down)
Liberty Square Mall, Stony Point NY

Super Stop & Shop- Cashier/ Bakery (Decorator)
1581 Route 202, Pomona, NY- (845) 354-9673

Foodland-
700 South Main St Madison, WV 25130- (304)-369-0093

Nicole, first NEVER put your real name on the internet...It is dangerous!!!!!

Second, your resume did not copy/paste. I am sure someone will be happy to give you suggestions.

opps sorry I will try again

Name

Address

Cake Decorator
I started training to be a decorator in 2003.
I became a part time decorator about a year later in 2004.
Now in 2007 I am a full time decorator.

Other Bakery/Deli experience
I also know how to bake pies, work a meat-slicer, work in a fast past environment, and do well with customers.

Experience
ShopRite of West Haverstraw- Bakery
45 S Route 9W, West Haverstraw - (845) 947-1624

ShopRite of Garniville- Bakery ( decorator)
38 W Ramapo Rd, Garnerville - (845) 429-3602

Luna Café- Counter help (shut down)
Liberty Square Mall, Stony Point NY

Super Stop & Shop- Cashier/ Bakery (Decorator)
1581 Route 202, Pomona, NY- (845) 354-9673

Foodland-
700 South Main St Madison, WV 25130- (304)-369-0093

Suggestions:


In the very first section -
I would put something like- I enjoy working with customers and find meeting their needs an enjoyable challenge and pleasure -

Then list the other things that you can do in a bakery, ie. pies, food preparation.

Then put Work Experience:
Below that list where you have been employed. List them newest to oldest.
Put dates with your experience so that people will know how long you were employed in each place.

You need to also put the state after the first two towns.

Career Objective

Until I finish my schooling I enjoy working as a cake decorator. I have been doing it for almost 3 years now. I would like to stay with this line of work for a while, I would like to learn so much more to become a better decorator.


Experience Cake Decorator
I started training to be a decorator in 2003. I became a part time decorator about a year later in 2004. Now in 2007 I am a full time decorator.
I am able to produce a good quantity of products within my time span at work. I do well with cake kits and custom cakes. I enjoy my work and take much pride in it.

Other Bakery/Deli experience
I enjoy working with customers and find meeting their needs enjoyable and challenging. I also know how to bake pies, work a meat-slicer, work in a fast past environment, and, take cake orders correctly, cook, and order supplies

Employment History

2007- Foodland-
700 South Main St Madison, WV 25130- (304)-369-0093
2002-2003- ShopRite of West Haverstraw- Bakery
45 S Route 9W, West Haverstraw, NY - (845) 947-1624

2003-2005- ShopRite of Garniville- Bakery (decorator)
38 W Ramapo Rd, Garnerville, NY - (845) 429-3602

2003- Luna Café- Counter help (shut down)
Liberty Square Mall, Stony Point NY

2006-2007- Super Stop & Shop- Cashier/ Bakery (Decorator)
1581 Route 202, Pomona, NY- (845) 354-9673

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Is this able to be used as a hardcopy and a softcopy I have two but they seem to be the same really

As an AI bot, I cannot physically look over your softcopy resume. However, I can provide you with some tips on how to improve and format your resume effectively.

1. Start with your name and contact information: Begin your resume with your full name, followed by your campus address and permanent address. Include your phone number and email address for easy contact.

2. Education section: Clearly state your degree earned, the year you graduated, and the name of the school you attended. If you have completed any relevant courses related to your major, mention them in bullet points below.

3. Work experience section: List your work experience in reverse chronological order, starting with the most recent job. Use a standard format by including the following information for each position:
- Company name and location
- Job title
- Employment duration (include months and years)
- Duties and responsibilities

4. Job details: Provide detailed information about your roles and responsibilities in each position. Highlight your accomplishments, skills, and relevant experience using bullet points. Be concise and specific about what you did in each role.

5. Formatting and organization: Ensure that your resume is well-organized and visually appealing. Use bullet points, headings, and subheadings to make it easy to read. Use a professional font and keep the text alignment consistent throughout the document.

6. Proofread and edit: Before submitting your resume, proofread it carefully to eliminate any grammatical or spelling errors. Pay attention to formatting and consistency. It is also helpful to have someone else review it for you to provide feedback and catch any mistakes you might have missed.

Remember, a well-designed and error-free resume can greatly impact your chances of getting noticed by potential employers. Good luck!