Use at least five adverbs and five adjectives to write a brief review of a movie, sporting event, musical performance, or television show.
• Bold each adverb.
• Underline each adjective.
• Compare the event to one or more similar events. When comparing, use at least three comparatives and three superlatives.
• Post your assignment for as a Word attachment to the Assignments Folder.
I recently went to a NIckelback, Three Days Grace, and Buckcherry Concert. I was very excited once we arrived at the arena where the concert was taking place. It was very cold waiting outside but once we got inside it was hot. The arena started to fill up fast. Everyone around was very talkative about the three bands that were going to be playing. When Nickelback took stage all you could hear was people screaming. There were loud shots and fire coming up next to them. I was carelessly dancing to the music. He played mostly all the songs that I knew. My friend and I decided to leave a few minutes early so we did not get stuck in traffic.
Of the three bands that were playing Nickelback had the brightest (SUPER) lighting. Buckcherry had a lot more cleaner (COMP) music then the other two. Nickelback was the funniest (super) of the bands. It seemed like the other two bands put on a simpler (comp) show then Nickelback. Buckcherry seemed to have the smallest (super) crowed, while Nickelback had the larger (comp) crowed.
ADVERBS recently, quickly, carelessly, mostly, early, very
Adjectives excited, cold, hot, talkative, three, screaming, loud
I'm not counting the adverbs, comparisons, etc. Hopefully you have that but there are a few errors.
1. more cleaner = simply "cleaner"
2. show then Nickelback = than
3. crowed. (twice; you need to correct 2 in the last sentence = crowd
Sra
Thanks so much
Did you not read Matt's post??
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1288418471
I recently attended a Nickelback, Three Days Grace, and Buckcherry Concert. I was quickly filled with excitement once we arrived at the arena where the concert was taking place. It was very cold waiting outside, but once we got inside, it was incredibly hot. The arena started to fill up rapidly. Everyone around was extremely talkative about the three bands that were going to be playing.
When Nickelback took the stage, all you could hear was people screaming. There were loud shots and fire coming up next to them. I was carelessly dancing to the music. They played mostly all the songs that I knew. My friend and I decided to leave a few minutes early so we did not get stuck in traffic.
Of the three bands that were playing, Nickelback had the brightest lighting. Buckcherry had a lot cleaner music than the other two. Nickelback was the funniest of the bands. It seemed like the other two bands put on a simpler show than Nickelback. Buckcherry seemed to have the smallest crowd, while Nickelback had the larger crowd.